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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HHhhmmmmm... Very interesting the way you portray Harry, Draco and Hermione at Marlston Manor, especially during the tattoo scene. Fucking LOVE IT by the way!!!! (From the point of view of someone who has a tattoo and will get a twining \"Draco\" one as well.) Hermione is Harry\'s soft side, his humanity and conscience, Draco is his darkness, his twisting sensuality. I love how you write them as balanced, though it is a threesome there is no power struggle. Yet, they have conflict that is natural as well...

schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(Snorts drink out the nose in shock) Ho--ly mother of GOD!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I have a huge thing for well done threesomes & in the HP universe this fic is FUCKING INCREDIBLE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! In character for all three of them & HE--LLOOOOOOOO Lucky fucking HERMIONE!! *groan* (Sprawled, sated, in the computer chair, legs dangling over the side.) This is like the sodding sexiest fic out there!!! Of its type!!! THANK YOU FOR WRITING THIS!!!!!!!!! (Drooling in a rather large puddle on the floor.) This is on my favorites list... ^.--
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cant wait to see more of hermione and kitty, you definitely need to develop that!! i would also like to see harry be a little more dominant with hermione. lovin all the kinkiness and can NOT wait for the next chapter!
person Sorceress14
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know I already reviewed for this chap but I can\'t wait any longer! You were on a role with your daily updates and now we get to a really good cliff hanger and a highly anticipated chapter and you don\'t update! What\'s up with that? Don\'t think I\'m being mean, I just really need you to write more, I\'m totally addicted to your story, it\'s basically the only reason i come online anymore.
person Petalsoft
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
My life basically runs at two week intervals. Every other week I\'m busy as hell and the other week I have plenty of time. On my \'off\' weeks are when you\'ll see lots of updates coming soon after the other. My busy weeks get harder to write and I\'m lucky if I can produce one chapter during those weeks as I have only a small amount of time to squeeze in writing. Today is the start of my busy week, but I\'ll try to get something out in a few days. Hope everyone understands! ~Petalsoft.
person imari
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story: way cool cant wait for the next 5 chapies
person Kimi
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FEMSLASH!!!!!!!! YES!!!!!!! I can\'t wait, I was really wondering what this \"Pet\" was going to be and I must say that I was very happily surprised to find out what or who it was. :) I really like the idea of Draco and Harry liking Hermione with another girl. Oh, and I also think it would be great if Harry and Draco watched Hermione and Kitty together, cause I think that would be super hot. I am really anxious to see about this whole Lucius thing. And how will Harry and Draco react when they find out that Lucius and Snape are coming to see them? It is all very exciting! Can\'t wait for more! :)
person Devoted Fan
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'ve red this for awhile and I love this better than I like some of the other actual H*P books and you should defininitly keep this up one of the best storys I\'ve ever read. You have such great talent and creativity that makes hundreds of people read and reveiw and compliment you, and your stories. you might want to look into a job doing stuff like this. (P.S I like this better than the sixth book)
person anjellic
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting chapter....I enjoyed Kitty. This could cause some problems as well as some fun! Can\'t wait to see what you do!
person Cyn
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
need more chapters.....great altogether....the plot it confusing but good at the same time......must keep writing chapters.....(pokes petalsoft) hurry up...-Cyn