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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m not sure if I ever reviewed before but I just thought it\'s about time I tell you how I feel about your story. I\'ve been reading fanfiction for almost two years now. I\'ve read so many stories and some times, I can\'t even tell which ones I\'ve read before because they all sound the same. The plots, the sex...everything just blends together.
But not yours. Your story is one of the most original, creative fics I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I never know what\'s going to happen. The drama and the kinkiness of the three characters makes this story hard to forget about. You update quickly which is a very good thing considering with a story like yours, the suspense would be torture. I read your story religiously and I\'d say I start from the beginning about once every other week. I have enjoyed every single chapter with immense satisfaction.
Your ideas are unbelievable. The Marlston family. Harry as a Dark Lord. I\'m so infatuated with your story. I just thought you would like to know.
-Justcrazyobsessed
But not yours. Your story is one of the most original, creative fics I have ever had the pleasure of reading. I never know what\'s going to happen. The drama and the kinkiness of the three characters makes this story hard to forget about. You update quickly which is a very good thing considering with a story like yours, the suspense would be torture. I read your story religiously and I\'d say I start from the beginning about once every other week. I have enjoyed every single chapter with immense satisfaction.
Your ideas are unbelievable. The Marlston family. Harry as a Dark Lord. I\'m so infatuated with your story. I just thought you would like to know.
-Justcrazyobsessed
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Man, I loooooooove this story.Sorry I\'m only reviewing now but I never seem to have anything interesting to say except \" brilliant story, plz write more\". Anyway, I think it would be a great idea if they all had a painting done of themselves while they were shagging. Thus they could carry on fucking into all eternity...and also get to watch themselves doing it( sort of like a vidio ^^)...
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m sitting in the library right now and your chapter was pure torture. i had to grind my tights together because the chapter was so hot! More av that pls....
By the way, i\'m bleeding from my lip beacuse i had to bite it so hard, i was practally moaning...
By the way, i\'m bleeding from my lip beacuse i had to bite it so hard, i was practally moaning...
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! that has to be one of the best damn chapters period!!! Holy shit I can\'t believe Merlin is underneath the Manor that is just too damn cool. Seriously you have some of the best ideas I have seen. So what does this mean Hermione is supposed to marry Draco and then they both have Harry as their lover until the next Dark Lord comes along? Hmm interesting. And eek! Tom Riddles painting, tear it down tear it down LOL. Oh and there little christmas erm buffet shall we call it was just hot! I can\'t wait to read more about this and find out more about the Marlstons and omg I am just dying for Lucius and Severus to show up, that outta be good, maybe those gits should pay a visit to Harrys friend in the dungeons HAHA! Ok I feel like I will start rambling on if I dont shut up now, Excellent chapter and as usual I am just dying for more, keep it coming!! Shannon
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hot hot hot. You are killing with the heat. But I love it. Please continue.
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August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Amazing revelations about Marlston. Feeling sorry for Kitty right now - days of waiting in a pet bed and she doesn\'t even get an orgasm! You\'re getting quite evil with this, but I love your writing so much.
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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was so not expecting Tom Riddle to be in one of those portraits and Merlin being buried beneath them. My jaw hit the floor. Excellent. Did I ever mention I love Autherian legends? Well I do and I was thrilled to be reading it in your story. Can\'t wait to see where this leads too. I felt sorry for Hermione - talk about information overload. That would have been surreal to see her parents like that. As for Kitty, once again all I can say is MEOW!! LOL Wonderful read!!
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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, that was a brilliant chapter, you really have thought this plot through! loved the whole \"christmas with kitty\" thing, that was genius. hope you get a new chapter up soon!
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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, so much wonderful information in that chapter. I really loved it.
Finding out about the triad\'s at Marlston, I was really very shocked, and I thought it was an excellent idea on your part. Then the part where we find out the Sebastian and Morgana were involved with Tom Riddle!! I was soo shocked, I never saw that coming! Never. I absolutely loved the part where the villagers swore their alligence to Harry, I am completely obsessed with the story when Harry \"puts on\" his Dark Lord mask and takes control, it is absolutely magnificent.
*Squee* FemSlash was excellent! hehe...very good. I am just soo excited for more! I check your story like 5 million times a day to see if you have updated, and then when I just went on I just knew that you had updated...AND YOU DID!! YAY!! I LOVE YOU AND YOUR WONDERFUL STORY!! :)
Finding out about the triad\'s at Marlston, I was really very shocked, and I thought it was an excellent idea on your part. Then the part where we find out the Sebastian and Morgana were involved with Tom Riddle!! I was soo shocked, I never saw that coming! Never. I absolutely loved the part where the villagers swore their alligence to Harry, I am completely obsessed with the story when Harry \"puts on\" his Dark Lord mask and takes control, it is absolutely magnificent.
*Squee* FemSlash was excellent! hehe...very good. I am just soo excited for more! I check your story like 5 million times a day to see if you have updated, and then when I just went on I just knew that you had updated...AND YOU DID!! YAY!! I LOVE YOU AND YOUR WONDERFUL STORY!! :)
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August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have to admit I always look to see if you have updated and was glad to see you had! Thank you. I was a lttle worried with the arrival of Kitty because I wasn\'t sure how you were going to work the character in without destroying the triad. Brilliantly done! Can\'t wait for more.