rate_review Reviews

very very very good.

i hope the next chaptor is finished soon

Great chapter, I can\'t wait to see what happens next. Your story is very addicting, I find myself checking AFF all the time to see if a new chapter is up.

lots of interesting things happening in this chapter. i like the revelations about harry\'s father and lucius. that was an ingenious way to explain james\' dislike to snape. i also liked the show of power harry had towards snape. the kiss with draco might have been a bit much, but then marlston is affecting them differently. i haven\'t liked your portrayal of lucius though. all the way to the inn, lucius was meek and not very aristocratic like he has been shown to be. i realize he has been through a bit, but still i don\'t think he would change so drastically. at least his cunning is still there while he is talking to harry and draco. by the way, i loved his reaction to finding hermione there hehe.

And the plot thickens and secrets are revealed... Harry needs a little reminder of the light side though... things are getting a bit dark... hmmm can\'t wait to see where u take it...

AAAAAAAARRRRRGGHHHH!!!!! GOD that is a heinously cruel cliff hanger!!!! (Bonks author over the head with a large rubber chicken) Hermione JUST walks into the room & Lucius reacts \"You!

Oh man, I\'m still waiting for Kitty to get more in the picture. I\'m also still loving dark Harry and him sticking it to Snape. Woo!

I like it as usual! its really cool, exspeical that last part! Your still Bloody Brillent!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I enjoyed reading your story. I liked how you had Draco starting to make peace with his Father. Please update soon

Oh u can\'t stop there. Great chapter. can\'t wait to read the next one.

Evil little cliffhanger there!!! Update soon!