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This is fabulous! Harry as a Dark Lord is damned sexy!! This is really a great read, I know its an old chapter (you\'re prolific and I\'m catching up to where you are still) but the peach-practicing lesson made me truly lol. I\'m coming back for more.

\"The snake in the ass thing was sick. Why did you do it?\"

\"Because it struck my fancy on the day I was writing it. LOL It

omg hremione walked in quick quick write faster i want to see what happeneds now dont make me pee in anticpation

\"Because it struck my fancy on the day I was writing it. LOL It

Well that answered some questions and precipitated others...lol. Thanks for the update.

I was so damn happy when i saw this thinking it was a new chapter but its not and i was pissed but now that i\'ve read it i\"m cool. where\'d you get the challge from though? cause i\'d want to read the other entrys for that challge too. ^^ i\'d hope there all as good as this one.

Im glad for all the answers to the questions.and I hope for fun that it was Sirius that Lucius was with.It would explain why he was so hell bent on hating Snape he was his cover(wink wink)

OH MY GOD! You\'re so evil for stopping there! Lucius better not to hurt Hermione...or Harry just might rip him to shreds, put him back together and do it again!

I really like your story the way you ended chapter 36 it will make people come back for even though i agree with what you did as an author it was still kind of upsetting to me to think that im going have to wait to find out how lucius reacts when he finds out that hermione is the marlston heiress please update soon the way your incorporated merlin was brilliant though it did upset me when you altered the original story of arthur being mordred\'s father it takes some of the unusuallness that has made the story so popular over the years away from it but its your story and that was an interesting twist i cant wait to see what happens with Kitty for the last week they are all at the manner i wondered how dumbledore\'s going to react when he finds out all that has happened and when are you going to put hemrione\'s tattoos to the test, the snake scene with paulo was creepy but i guess i must have a warped sense of humour to because i probably would have found it funny if i was terribly afraid of snakes

FAREWELL AND I CANT WAIT TO BE PULLED BACK INTO YOUR VERSION OF THE HARRY POTTER MEGAVERSE
p.s it pulls me in just like j.k rowlings versions do so keep up the good work

I love your story!! You could do one thing to make it better though.......Hermione in BONDAGE!! LOL I think that it would fit in with Marlston don\'t you?

Just a suggestion that I really, really, REALLY hope you use.
Meaghan