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pretty good chapter about oath and what to do to get snape to comply =)

update faster ^-^ i lyk this story

Holy shit that was fucking brilliant!!!! I am laughing my ass off over here at Harry hanging Snape upside down omg, and how he mentioned his filthy underwear he had seen from his trip in the pensieve in 5th year HAHAHAHAHA!!!!!! ok breathe breathe... ok now hehe, that chapter was so fun, the lucius action was delicious I just love him so I was most happy to get a dose of that sexy Slytherin, and not to mention our lovely kitty is finally getting some more play time. OMG I can hardly wait for the next chapter. I also would like to say that I LOVE dark Harry, he\'s such a badass in this fic and that\'s quite refreshing, bad boys get me all riled up just like our Draco lol. Damn this sucks I wanna read more right NOW hahahaha, patience patience I know. Hurry with the next chapter I can\'t wait!!!!!! (obviously lol)

well....
hmm..what can I say about this newest addition
I\'ve got a slight complaint..to me you\'re losing Harry\'s character too quickly through his role as a Dark Lord
Draco\'s character seems to be in tact and though Hermione is losing her normal outlook on things its more realistic because you at least show her putting up a fight..but with Harry its like one minute he still had his beliefs and dislike for Dark Magic in tact and the next he\'s getting blood offerings and acting like Voldemort would without even a second thought
Maybe its (as you say) the effect of Marlston..but even so I think its a large change from J.K.\'s views on their personalities which in the beginning I thought you stuck to and molded around your story very well
I actually want a respone for this review so i\'m going to leave my email addie as well

On a different note..your style of writing is wonderful and your ideas are thrilling so..keep up the good work! ^^

ok i think your \'questions and answers\' chapter was shit you didnt dish any juicy information, oh well, cant say i expected you too. as a writerits smart that you didnt, but still its frustrating on this side of the story. youre my most favorite author on this site i swear. even your Q&A had me rivited! but i must comment on this :

\"2. Why do you leave evil cliffhangers?

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(laughing so hard that I\'m having a nosebleed) BOWELS! THAT, WAS, FUNNY!! UPDATE!

Hey,
I really love your story so far.
I love what happened to Lucius...
From your answer to the question on Lucius\'s secret lover...would that be one of the marauders?If another man...
And i really hope tht your not planning on putting hermione as riddle\'s daughter...that would be too weird.
see you

Bit of a late coment that I\'d like to make & it\'s that I love the name Marlston. It\'s a realistic upper class name that doesn\'t sound over the top or stuffily pompous in any way, it\'s just simple, powerful and somehow forbidding... ^.--

Well this was a fun filled chapter, wasn\'t it? lol It\'s interesting watching Harry be in the position of power with someone other than the other two of the triad. I think those two men should watch their step very, very carefully.

WOW!! That was good!!! I\'m at the edge of my seat!! UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!

I\'ll say it again, what an adventureous imagination you have! Two threesomes at once? Or maybe that\'s just my wishful thinking! Thanks for the post!