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like this dark Harry....very sexy......wonder what Snape\'s gonna do to Kitty next...hehe....loved this chapter.....keeep \'em coming...-Cyn

Now we know who Snape really is in canon (Do we actually?), will Harry trust
Snape? He should know better. The other thing I see is that Hermione is
drifting away from her own ways. Is this just the effect of the Marlston Mansion,
or will there be a permanent effect? In any case, from what you wrote earlier
about just letting the story evolve, I think you\'re writing a great piece of fiction,
but it would be advisable for you to decide where you wish to get by the end, or
else, you\'re in danger of suffering from wha happens to most fan-fics; never
reaching a suitable ending. I believe there\'s great potential in developing the
doubt of whether Hermione\'s biological father is Tom Riddle...

OMG that was so hot and so wrong at the same time. I mean having Lucy performing sex infront of his son, shit that takes some balls to write.

Great chapter! You should think about doing email updates for your fics since you seem to have so many people that follow it. That way we, your readers, will know right away, by email when a new chapter is up and not have to check AFF.net all the time hoping for a new chapter. Just a thought...

LOL WOW Poor Sev that was so funny.

It\'s amazing how quickly and efficiently those who dwell beneath react to everything around them. They seem to be pre-empting Hermione\'s thoughts now. Poor Severus, all that teasing and being put on the spot like that. Send him over to me, I\'ll take care of him. LOL I\'m so pleased that Kitty is getting to have some fun at last.. All that excitment and no release would not make for a very happy pussy, er I mean Kitty. ;) Hope the next chapter isn\'t too far away. :)

I enjoyed reading your story. I liked how you had Harry get Snape to take a blood oath to him. Please update soon.

You and your story is so fucking great.............every chapter superb.............every sex scene mind blowing...........can\'t wait for the next chap...........hope to hear you soon........and did I tell you how intelligent, great, and good you are. Ja Ne

Bugger was now standing nearby with the cloth and dagger, waiting for instructions. Harry pulled their attention away from Kitty by saying,

Does Lucius still have the dark mark? Will Hermione be showing Severus and Lucius the portraits ? I can\'t wait to read more.