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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person yomouda
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dumbass...
person fragonknight01
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was more than mean but it is a whole lot of fun at the same time to realize that Snape can be led by his dick! Awesome chapter there!
person ShatteredxDream
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EXCELLENT! I read this in one sitting.. it took a long time but I enjoyed it :) More fluffyness... No four or fivesomes right? That would be so cool to see.. LOL.. Update soon!
person badblondee
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ARGGGGGHHHHH!!!! I thnk i like ure stories a bit 2 much. I go online 2 chek if u hav put up da new chapta evry hour!!!! I can\'t help it...it\'s just so good.
Just one thing, can u put more, i dunno wat 2 call it...Harry n Draco time? Yeah, they need 2 b together more!
Keep Writing
-Ashlee
person Mrs Luna Potter
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
loved it!! great chapter oh the fun it looks like they will have!!! so glad you updated!!!
person jules
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just found this through an LJ recommendation. Fabulous story. I love the smut, I think it is very erotic. I like the story you have developed - I think it is quite creative and unusual. I like how you are exploring the emerging D/Hr/H relationship and everyone\'s reaction to it. It is an unusual trio but one of my favorites.

Great job and I definitely am waiting - not so patiently - for the next chapter!
person Kimi
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW, that was amazing. I am so itching for the next chapter, that was a very evil cliffhanger, but you gave me a nice taste of what is to come. Hehe...can\'t wait. I am just loving this submissive Lucius, guh it\'s so hot. And of course, Dark Lord Harry is just sooo hot! :) Keep up the great work!
person jada
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i want more.
person strawberris
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i would like to learn more about hermiones family. sex is great in this story but too much of it just makes the story bland. who\'s hermiones father? i want it to be tom riddle!!
person jessica
schedule August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Omg! That chappie was great write more plz.