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whoo that was a brilliant chapter, petal!! lots of sex, lots of plot, just the way it should be. as always, youve left us all eager for the next chapter. keep it up!! :)

WOW, WOW, WOW...I am just sooo freaking excited to find out what this Lucius/Hermione things turns out to be. Hmm...I don\'t think Draco would be to happy about that now would he? And Harry? Haha...this is getting so good. You know, when I first started reading your story I pretty much just read it for the smut cause it was so hot and wonderful. NOW, the smut is still hot and wonderful...but you also make me so excited for the plot too. You have developed such a beautiful story to go along with some smut and POW you have quite an amazing story. *bows* You are amazing.

Oh no! My favourite Snape is now going to be subservient to Harry. Not sure that\'s a good idea. How easily he caved in just to get a cheap thrill shagging Kitty, who\'s almost non-sentient. Great stuff, though. Still following the story avidly - along with all the kinky action.

OH NO HE DIDN\'T JUST LOOK AT HERMIONE WHILE SHE WAS GETING DRESSED!!!! IM GONNA KILL HIM!!!!

It is amazing to see that this story started out as a challenge response. And now it has evolved into a wonderful story with lots of depth and a surprisingly good plot. Keep it up. I love this story.

Sean

Nice solution about who was Hermione\'s biological father. It was quite natural...I should have guessed it!
You\'ve managed to build a very interesting story. Actually, after HBP, I think it\'s better than the original.

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Ohhhhhh Lucius is bad (as we already know) but I hope that Those Who Dwell Below will help hermione if he tries to do anything.....

For some reason, I have a fear of Draco turning them all evil. Now I like evil. Evil is sexy. But I just don\'t see Harry becoming a Tom Riddle. Maybe I\'m just taking too much out of his whole \"My Lords\" and things. I love this story. I do! So fucking much. I love Dark!Harry. I normally don\'t like his character, but you write him so eh\'s favorable. And their threesome relationship is just so yummy! I love the creative tongues you have taken with this whole mansion thing. \'Tis brilliant. You\'re a genius to think like that. You say that the mannor has powers. Sexual ones...dark ones. Will they be lurred to the dark side? And I hope Lucius does take a go at Hermione so he could get punished. Oh, a punished Lucius would make for something very kinky. Anyway, please continue this fic. It\'s so gorgeous. <3KC