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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person m
schedule August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hm.. Lucius is getting a little closer than comfortable... Glad to know Hermy and Voldie aren\'t related (as far as we know now) I can\'t wait to see where you take this...
person ME
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY
person Satan
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, I was actually reading one of the earlier comments by Mena and I do have something to say about her whole idea of \"The walls of the vagina touch, so it\'s not a hole gaping open, its a potential space.\"
Well honestly, Mena. I wonder how much more you\'d like this story if Petal had Hermione say, \"Ron, stick your fingers in my \'potential space\'.\" Dunno about you, but I prefer saying hole. \'Potential space\' just doesnt do it for me. Anywho, Petal, keep up the brilliant writing, can\'t wait for your next masterpiece ;)
person jada
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
woot!
person Sorceress Black
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
God I love Harry mouthing off to Snape. After all these years of reading the books and having to see Harry endure Snape\'s unfair shit, it is nice to see him get a little payback, even though its not \"in the books\" but hey it works for me all the same. That was a really good chapter, it was nice to get a little more Marlston information, and of course the smut is always welcome, I don\'t even think I have the proper compliments for Snape getting some Kitty action, no pun intended hehe, I will just say that at least he didn\'t have to screw any of the house elves haha. And OMG I cannot wait to see what happens with Lucius the peeping tom. Is he going to make some advances? What will Hermione do? and better yet what will our boys do? Even though I know the pairings in this I can\'t help but be interested in Lucius\' erm \"activities\" as I just love his evil ass lol. Keep up your wonderful writing this truly is one of the absolute best fics ever!!!!!!!
person KageMage15
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lucius is such an idoit I swear it. You can just tell that he\'s going to do something extreamly stupid. Cant they just kill him and get it over with? Oh and why do I get the feeling that Harry going to be a distain relative of Mr.Riddle? In some odd round about way gees that\'d be not cool but it\'d explain some stuff unless of cousre...
person NeNe Harumi
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just wanna say..Lucius is such a horn dog and I hope Harry and Draco break his shalong >>
Yes it can be done <<
Anyhow..nice chappie keep up the good work and don\'t make us wait too long! ^^
person Anon
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Morgana and Sebastian are names from The Little Mermaid, are they not? If you did take them from the movie I\'m ever so pleased, The Little Mermaid has always been my favorite Disney movie.

Keep up the good work, I\'m loooooving this fanfiction along with your others. This plot is just amazing.

-A fan.
person firewall
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter. Hermione must be relieved Voldemort is not her father...I would be. Poor Snape...not too pleased that the triad were voyeurs. I thought Harry made a very good point and the poor little house elf would be relieved. hahaha. Thank you for sharing I\'m interested to see what the snake in the grass, Lucius, is up to.
person Granolla_Bar
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
dun dun dun!!! he better not do what i think he\'s about to do!!!! this is such filled with suspence!!!! will he rape her? will harry and draco beat the crud out of him? please continue!!! i love this!!!