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for What a Witch Needs

by TCardan

person Bean
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I surmissed it couldn\'t be Hermione, but who was it then? The dwellers of the castle?
person Alleycat
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, nice chapie! I knew it wasn\'t the real lady of the manner. ^_^ I just hope Harry doesn\'t do something stupid and free Merlin. Yeah Merlin was a good guy but so is Harry and look how he\'s acting with the dark power!


So please update soon.

^_~
person Kim
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good writing so far! I\'ve been reading this story for awhile and it\'s by far one of the best i\'ve ever read. I don\'t understand why Marlston is effecting Harry Hermione and Draco thay way. Harry\'s turning somewhat-evil and Draco is trying to become powerful-er. Hermione hasn\'t changed much really, besides being more horny. That\'s okay! :-D Keep on writing and updating!
Love,
Kim
person Ko
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi Petalsoft!
I just read your entire fiction... I am a big fan. Unfortunately I haven\'t had a taste of waiting for the next chapter to arrive, so I\'m going to be getting impatient and antsy now!
Anyway, it\'s been such a great read, and I just wanted to commend you. You\'ve incorporated a lot of great twists and plot turns as well.. At the moment I\'m kind of missing Hogwarts, because it was great to watch the trio running around secretly (or not so secret anymore), whereas at Marlston they can just have sex whenever...
I\'ll be waiting anxiously for the next chapter!
person jessica
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
haha i did think it was some illusion xD
person Robbie Byrd
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked what you had Bugger do to Lucius. Because he was spying on Hermione.
person jada
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love ur title names. theyre really oringinal
person eddie
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter keep um commin
person eddie
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter keep um commin
person rubberduck
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very intriguing things happening here. i\'m glad hermione isn\'t the daughter of riddle. that would have been a bit much i think. harry\'s thoughts on merlin this chapter are interesting. too bad hermione seems biologically opposed to them. i wouldn\'t want to see them fight or at odds with one another, but it would be a good way to get rid of voldemort. the only problem with that is, they would be giving up an evil they know for something that could be worse. we all have these stories of merlin that make him to be good and all, but he is a manipulator and with both dark and light magic, he could be too much to handle. and darn you for your end of chapter mysteries. who is meri?