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for Ordinary day

by sybersnake

person Tragedy
schedule April 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That story is really fantastic, great!
Please go on with the whole thing.

Greetings
person Katie
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES! Not to sound greedy, but MORE, MORE! I can\'t wait for the next chapter!
person Katie K
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yup, still loving this story. Update soon please!
person Nyos
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! i hope there will be more? yes? pretty please! i like this idea of Charlie and Severus having a little family of thier own!
are they married?

ooh! i can\'t wait to see the rest of the familys reaction, hopefully it turns out alright in the end!

anyway, update soon!!!

Nyos,
person fragonknight01
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story all the way up to the end. I think that a Weasley fainting to end the story is beginning to be a bit too cliche. The way you wrote Molly\'s character in, I realize she was in denial about grandchildren. Yet I can\'t help but feel you did yourself a disservice by not working on a better problem solving approach, yes? Oh, well, what you did do was very good.
person Katie
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s sooo hard to find a Sev/Charlie, let alone one with mpreg! PLEASE write more, it sounds great!
person moondancer
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a wonder wonder wonderful story. I looove it!! Most of all the pairing and the two of them building a nice familiy. Please continue soon!
person Katie K
schedule April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awww... I love this story. :-)
person yotan\'s girl
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! You can\'t just stop there! Please update this story fast cause I want to know what Molly will do now. I just love this pairing and there just isn\'t enough Snape and the Weasleys slash.
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this!! What a bad, bad Charile!!! I\'d love to know when you put up the next chapter!!