rate_review Reviews

I've been looking for some time now for a Harry/Snape fic that's not utterly boring. I found it in this one.
The idea is great, and the story so far is very well written. Both characters have a personality, a depth that can rarely be found in fanfiction. There's actually psychology in this story that is a goodl deal above the usual we-hate-each-other-but-then-somehow-we-don't.
I really love these two chapters, and I hope there'll be more soon.

Tough subject! Will Harry bring back Snape\'s erections?

Wow. I\'m in awe of your ability to write Snape and Harry in character while adding this new level of depth to the mix. Do not drop off the face of fanfiction like so much wasted potential, this is too good to leave unfinished.

Eagerly awaiting your next installment.

AWESOME.. I\'m not a huge snarry fan but you\'ve done a fabulous job and I cannot wait to read more.. you\'ve captured their personalities well and i love the witty conversation between them

Very well written with a fresh, acute look at two of the most interesting players of the HP world. You\'ve fleshed out Snape nicely, and though the \"Need-sex-to-feel\" plotline can get tiring, you\'ve managed to keep it a notch above cliche. The first chapter was utterly brilliant and I hope more of the snappy, witty conversations take place. You\'ve got a real gift for writing (I love your D/H and D/Hr stuff, too) so please continue soon!

Great job please update soon

OMFG............................wow.........................um interesting............I kinda like where you are going with this.................um...............if at all possible can you update really really soon?

Pretty please with sugar and a cherry (or not) on top?

Oh, you must continue this story. This is the meat and potatoes of Harry and Severus. Their inner most feelings coming out, so exposed, so vulnerable, so......real and believable, so snarry. The life decisions to be made in war, who lives, who dies, and who\'s next with the angst of feelings surpressed and unresolved all mixing together in a confusion of thoughts and fleeting glimpses, just terrific.

For a first fic, this is really great. Excellent plot, great writing, spelling and grammar in place and all the juicy details that make a great story.

Wonderful, please post soon.

The atmosphere you weave with tactile imagery really is spellbinding. This story is pulling me in as would an excellent novel. Looking forward to your next update. Have you written any original characters?

Dark, but good. And I can\'t wait for the next installment, please let it be soon!