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hahaha wow....choices are hard...but I can\'t wait to see wht happens. ;)

Hey, good story. I was just wondering if you are still looking for a beta reader because I noticed in some of your chapters you jump between past and present tense. Drop me a line if you\'re interested.

Glad to hear it\'s still ongoing ..... looking forward to the next installment with bated breath :-)

just wanted to say that the ending of that chappie was really hot and im dying to find out what happens next! i love the way you use appropiate humour and eroticism :)

Formatting problems or no, it twin SMUT! hahahaha RAWR!

I like the new fetish stuff at the end, very suiting for such \"playful\" creatures. ;) Look forward to more soon.

*giggles maniacally at the sight of a balding Malfoy*
Truly delightful! Whatever will Chloe do when she discovers that she\'s been \"doubling her pleasure\"?

please continue. there aren\'t many twin tales on this site, so the more the merrier! :) I love the twins...they are my favorite!

You have a lot of potential with this. Maybe seek a Beta for it. I do like the concept though, it it original, I haven\'t read anything about wizard artists so its very cool. Though what one person said about American stuf being Mary Sue, I don\'t agree. I think it at least takes another approach of the characters and putting them in a differnt situation, course I am writing something similar so that is why I don\'t think it\'s Mary Suish I guess. Anyway I await the next sections, the Twins are my favorite characters and I wrote a story a while back that was kinda dark with them.

Anyway keep going and please let Malfoy be the butt of the jokes still. I like him sometimes in tales, but competing against the twins, nah LOL Anyway good luck!

AW! I simply loved the prank Fred did on Malfoy! I was laughing out loud! (somehting I rarely do in any story) Anyway, I don\'t know why but Chloe reminds me of Nancy from the Sid and Nancy movie...(could be that the actress playing Nancy was named Chloe) Great three chapters, I can\'t wait to read more!!!

~Sam

Brilliant FF, I had read the first chapter via T-Mobile\'s sidekick so the blasted thing doesn\'t let me review anything. *clears throat* Anyways, can\'t wait to read more of what\'s going to happen in the next few chapters. And it\'s good to hear that the \'gang\' keeps together and gets together on Saturdays at least.

Love, Hugs and Bludgers,

Trix ^_^