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for Who Would Have Thought

by JustJacie

person thrnbrooke
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Harry could have let the other two see him. But he protected Draco. He\'s defending him as well. Hmm. Can\'t wait for chapter 15!
person Narcissa Black
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m usually not terribly fond of OCs, but I\'m not sure which one I want to attack more, Ian or Draco. Pansy was in over her head, but letting everyone think the baby was Draco\'s was just weak and wrong. What if he really wanted the child and took it away from her? Pretty hard for gay men to produce an heir, and she had said that the baby was his, after all. Anyway, I can\'t wait for you to update.
person Susan
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good, it\'s become more intriguing. But I think you\'re a bit slow on this story..
The progress is too slow....I\'ve read a stroy that spent lots of chapters to just got into the point.
And I feel tired reading it. I hope your story doesn\'t turn like that.
Great job though....



person ice
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hahah! I love it!
person meirta
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As always brilliant. I really enjoy your OC\'s which is saying something because I almost never give stories with OC\'s a chance. I like Ian and Ben so much though, I know this ends up becoming a H/D story, which I\'m a big fan of, but I don\'t want anything bad to happen to Ian. Please update quickly, the new chapters always make my day.
person zentiis
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was deliciousssss.......i really like this fic. but-but harry! draco! sexing! (go away ian)
person tewks
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome Fic! Very Creative plot elements.
person Quichi
schedule June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEEEEEE!! Yay you finally updated!!!! i am SO so so so beyond happy. i shall dance for you. *dances* i am stuck at home and im bored and Nobody updates the stories i like but you did!! happy happy happy happy happy.......
person Sabina Jordan
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you. must. update.
or face the wrath of sabs.
you\'ve got a terrific story going on and then -ploof- it stops...
UPDAAAATE.
please, for both yours and my wellbeing.
person Hello
schedule June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update soon, Pls?