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Is Ian the daddy of Pansy's baby? That's why everyone thought it was Draco. Harry thought Ian looked like Draco the first time he saw him. Wow!

I read your warning about after graduation Harry/Draco so after Chapter one I skipped ahead to chapter 9 and I tell you I am where Draco's mother is with him in hospitol Very good story Today is November 13 2007 Please update soon

This story is very good I just stayed up to read the whole thing. Update soon! I need to know is Draco still pregnant or did he lose the baby?!!

FUCKING HELL! THIS BLOODY STORY IS INCREDIBLE. UPDATE A.S.A.P. HOPEFULLY TODAY

I think your a good writer, I really love your writing style. Unfortunately your story seems to be written to make the reader identify, or sympathize, with Draco and that's just something I've never been able to do. I don't find him to be a pitiable character at all, so when there's a story focusing on him and his pain and suffering I find that I just don't care. And if figure if I can't find it in me to care and the story is aimed at trying to make me care, I probably shouldn't read it. But I just wanted to tell you that I do think your good writer and I hope that maybe you'll write a story that I would be interested in reading.

Oh and before I end, I had a question/comment. I noticed that you had the story labeled as having the pairings DMOMC and DMHP. But the first pairing seems to be OMCDM, though I guess writing it like that would be a bit odd. But does that mean that the Draco and Harry pairing is really DMHP or is it HPDM? I guess you'd wonder why that matters if I'm not going to read the story, but I try to spread the knowledge where I can for future notice. Because I'm not sure if you know or not, but DMHP is usually used if Draco is the more dominant part of the pairing (or basically he's the top) and HPDM is usually used if Draco is the more submissive part of the pairing (or again basically he's the bottom). Yea, there are some people who don't think it matters, but some readers prefer to read one type or the other and it helps if the story is labeled one or the other. And now I'll shut up because I'm starting to sound like a teacher and probably annoying the hell out of you (especially if you already know all this). So good bye:)

Thank you so much for the update. I thought you had abandoned the story and I'm very pleased to see that is not the case. I enjoyed this chapter and hope to read more soon.

Hey!....great to see that you have updated....was waiting for so long....hope you can finish the story....its so intriguing...and waiting to see H/D and H/D babies!!

ch 17 Oh Wow. This is great. While a relationship between Harry / Draco at school can be and has been done well, I prefer the thought of them out of school. Especially when they are given the chance to develop a friendship. And for those of us who like a little sex, and don't expect the boys to arrive in each other's beds as virgins the relationships they experience as they become young men just make this even better.

I hope your real life lightens up and you have lots of time to beg, bribe, or beat your muse into submission.

hey I really love this fic, and I would be glad to read more about it, so please let me know if you0re going to continue it.
please!

One word.......wonderful...write more pwease!
I can't wait. I will be following this story, so UPDATE!!!