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for The Laws of Love

by KassandraRamsey

person JTBJAB
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Lol, dear dear dear Harry, did he not think that there would be a problem not thinking about how Melanie would react to his Plan!?

I love that last line! Hehehe!

Can\'t wait for your next chapter!
person Wizarding Angel
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic. I love how you have Snape portraide as a git and none the less nicer for now. It is well written and very good Keep up with the excellent work.
person JJ
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YEA!!! more story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Was Snape mean to Hermoinie on purpose to keep her from falling apart (as you might have hinted), or is he really such a snarky bastard? I thought he WANTED his marriage to work out if only for sex. I liked the flashback for Charlie\'s intended. I saw that coming for Harry a mile away - or at least I hoped it would come. I like that he\'s a possible mirror of Snape, but also that he didn\'t get a thousand proposals at once. Other than the M/M, Harry isn\'t allowed many happy endings in fanfic\'s. The thought that he might have one, if she can get around his anger, is great. I\'m really enjoying your story and hoping the couples will eventually work their way to togetherness. I\'m a succer for happy endings!
person JTBJAB
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Coolio chapter!

Can\'t wait for the next chapter, although i hope Severus stops being quite as mean!
person Carmella
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK you plaied Snape a little to well, you shocked even me! Oh well the story was good, please do contiuntue and if I might ask, play down Snape a bit. I happen to have him in high regards.
person Carmella
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well done can we perhaps get more please?
person wakhiza
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter! I especially liked the situation with Miss Walsh and Miss Odom. It was nice to see a young Slytherin portrayed in a positive light, and a Gryffindor less than flattering. Kind of like in \'Order of the Phoenix\' when we found out that, hey, Harry\'s dad wasn\'t just a one-dimensional perfect person. He had layers, and just like everybody else his character can\'t be defined as black or white. Very well done!!!

I will be looking forward to your weekly updates (please keep it up!!! there is NOTHING worse than finding a really good story that you are enjoying the heck out of and, WHAMMO!!! no more updates). It will be like a weekly treat :-) Keep up the great work.
person JTBJAB
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, hehehe Hermione drunk!
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter! Update again and soon!

Tiffany
person azulkan2
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story. Looking forward to more.