rate_review Reviews

Ohmygosh!!!! What can I say? You have done it again. Another excellent chapter. I am so pleased with the way Hermione and Severus are feeling each other out and trying (each in their own way) to come to terms with things. (LOVED the novel bouncing off of Snape\'s head!) So many stories have them almost routinely falling into a lovey-dovey relationship immediately, and Seveerus immediately turns from the black bat of the dungeons to Fabio! This is much more realistic. I am also really enjoying the development of things between Harry and Melanie, this tiny little girl who has been thrust into this situation and is being abused by her own house. Everything is wonderful! Charlie and Rachel, the other three Weasleys determined to hold on to bachelor status, everything!!! I especially loved the last line of this chapter, \"the first night in six years he didn\'t dream about Ginny\". That was very, very touching.

Please, please, please keep updating!!!

I simply HAVE to tell you that I REALLY like this story! And the thing with Charlie\'s so CUTE! Please, please keep on writing. It\'s turning out great.

I\'m am loving this story. Even though it\'s been done a lot, marriage law fics are some of my favorite. And this is a great twist to the norm. I like that there are other story lines, not just Hermione and Snape. Please keep it going, I can\'t wait to read more!

More, oh God, more: Please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

The action is quick, the story is captivating. How cruel that Harry\'s bride should be tortured like that. I WANT JUSTICE!!!!! THE ENTIRE HOUSE SHOULD BE CRUCIO\'D!!!!!!!!!!! What did Snape do to them? Please, huh, please, tell us!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! What does Snape look like???????????? MORE, MORE, MORE!!!!!! What do you have in mind for Ron and the twins? Torture, please?

I liked the last part where harry did not dream about Ginny. I know it is sad, but it will be all that much harder if/when Harry is thinking and compairing her to Ginny. I hope Hermione and Severus find some common ground.

I REALLY think this is a terrific story and I am glad you are updating often. Thanks!

OH. MY. GODS! This is getting better an better as it builds. I do hope that Melanie will be okay. Perhaps they could \"find\" an unused tower to make into (for those not on staff) married dorms/flats. Perhaps someone (either Melanie or Hermione) could find a bounceback shield spell and the next time one of those little bitches pulls something on an engaged student... well, you get the idea. I can\'t wait to see where you take this next:)

Gut-wrenching chapter. As Rachel said, it is amazing people can be so cruel. Great story, looking forward to the next part.

Absolutely Excellent

i hvae only one word for you: WOW.