rate_review Reviews

chapter well done...loved the retaliation...can\'t wait to see what you have planned next...update again soon!!

another interesting chapter. reading through the different blurps about each new \'engagement/marrige\' is almost like watching a soap opera where were only allowed to see the tension build before were ripped away to view another couple...but thats just my opionion, since i\'d much rather read them all sepreatly...expesioly the harry and melanie match, they are great! charlie and his match? not so sure, and what about the twins? not that I want my cute twinies being paired with ne one other that eachother (hides..from broslash haters) but dont they need to be married by this law as well?...ok too many Q\'s, so great writting..but like this message I just wrote there are a few typo\'s that would be nice if they got fixed...because \'feel\' was used twice in place of fell....

I simply love the ending of Chapter 7.
Only Severus and Hermioe could use Bitch and Bastard as endearments!

Now that is a believable Hermione and Severus sex scene

aww how nice i cant wait in till you update next so please update sooon

angel

It\'s great. I really like this story. Please Please keep it up! ^_^

addicting!! extraordinarily written!! you are talented so please dont stop. thats all i can say. please please write this story until the end. dont stop half way through i might DIE! i like the different characters love stories all being written out so you get the whole picture.

more!!!!!! thats all i have to say

i really like how this fic is coming i cant wait in till more comes out .

I just found this story and am pleased with the direction you have taken it. It is well done, despite some typos/grammatical errors. (and instead of an, and things like that...)I will need to remember to check for this story. I enjoyed reading it.