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he took that better then i thought and charlie has to tell rachel that he loves her back i mean they he does love her right i hope so and ron has to get george to talk to katie about the wedding man i cant wait in till you update next soooo do so soon and thank you in till next in later

angel

very nice...george has been tied down...hehehe...wonder when the other will be like that...especially ron...anyway keep up the good work n do update it soon...

that was great i cant was in till he finds out the true .....man will he be shocked heheheh ... will in till next time i cant wait well later

angel

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if in have not told you i love this story

Poor Hermione. I\'d think that Severus would connect the dots, but it must be too early in the morning for him to comprehend that she lied to him. Then there\'s Fred, LOL! Oh man! Who are you going to find for him? Or is he going to remain a bachelor. He won\'t actually get away with that, will he? It was an emotional night for all of these people. Harry and Melanie. I just hope that Harry\'s dream wasn\'t an omen that Ginny\'s spirit is trying to interfere. I like Melanie and I like how Harry is starting to care for her. Please update as soon as you can! ~Ginny

vainly hoping for new chapter....*sigh*

okay...so now hermione is pregnant...charlie is engaged 2 a collins...harry is getting married 2 his own student...n george had just submitted a petition 4 his friend...wonder what will happen next...anyway keep up the good work n hope u\'ll update it soon...

just hoping for an update...*sigh*

This is a really great fic. I\'m REALLY enjoying it. Someone on WIKTT rec\'d it a while back and I\'ve finally gotten aroud to reading it. So glad that I did. This is a really unique and fun take on the MLC.

And for the record, please don\'t feel bad if people criticize your characterization of Snape. Your Snape is truly canon Snape in all his glory. While reading a story with a Love Sick!Snape can sometimes be fun, the closer it gets to HBP I notice I\'m craving more canonness. This Snape TRULY fits the bill.

So, don\'t let the fan girls get you down! As much as they (and hell, even I) want him to be, Snape is not: a fluffy bunny, a simpering romantic, or a gallant hero riding on a white horse to save damsels in distress. He is impatient, snarky, and short-tempered. His nose is hooked, not \"aquiline\" and his hair is greasy. That\'s all there is to it, folks. Anyway, I love your Snape and I love your Hermione. She is vulnerable, big-hearted, bossy and smart. Just as she should be. :-D

Good job! Keep it up!

And now that I\'ve paid you all those compliments...UPDATE SOON! ;-)

wow, i\'m really looking forward to an update! it\'s good to see that harry is already getting a soft spot for melanie. keep up the good work!

I am really enjoying this, and was sorry to reach the end of what\'s posted. I hope you have more of it coming! I\'d offer to beta for you, but I\'m useless with Wendy/Hook (at least I\'d imagine so--the only one I have attempted to read was so foul I quit after two chapters). I\'m really only good for mechanics and grammar anyway; I feel guilty when I start messing with ideas. So good luck with that. And I hope to catch more of this Hermione/Snape--Marriage Law story, it\'s very good.