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for The Laws of Love

by KassandraRamsey

person kayron
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
noooooo!!! cliffhanger!!!!!!!! stop the torture!!!!!!!!
person e.j
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh my god...ginny is still alive...if harry finds out what will happen to melanie...n what will happen to them...poor mel coz harry will probably go back to ginny...plz update it soon...
person Tegan
schedule July 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Truth be told, I wasn\'t sure what to think when I started to read this...but it sucked me into it. Now I can freely ask: \"WHAT??? YOU LEFT IT THERE???\" *Ahem* This is really great. I can\'t wait for you to post more. :)
person Quashi
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"You really did lose your hand.\"

That sentence reminded me of something I did the first time a met a Black man. We shook hands, but in stead of letting go, I turned his hand over, then turned it back over. \"You\'re two different colors.\"

For me, Harry\'s wife-to-be comes across as blunt spoken, but not intentionally rude. Well done.
person Vampire_Exotica
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AGHHHHHHHH! You can\'t leave us on that evil cliffy!!!!!!!!!!!!! Please please please please please please please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Kari
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very impressed. And so very glad that you are continuing your story. I am following a couple of stories to see how they turn out. The emotion you can evoke with your character developments are great. I almost cried when Hermione finally got Snape to admit that he cared for her. I knew Ginny was alive somewhere but I thought that Draco was involved in her concealment. I am more sympathetic w/ Katie & Ron getting together especially as Ron\'s blood compatability is probably similar as he is George\'s brother. I can see George & Fred paired w/ a pair of fiesty twins who will love them to distaction but yet not be above leading them a merry chase. of course it is your story and however you write it, I will continue to read it. Can\'t wait for the next update.
person Maela
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! I do hope an update is coming in the next day or so...right?!
person Sammie Curls
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Oh god no! Ginny can\'t be alive. I love Ginny to death and all but if she is alive, I know you won\'t make her and Harry together because he will end up being with Mel. I couldn\'t bare to read it. I would probably cry. Please don\'t let her be alive. Its hard enough reading about Harry kissing someone other than Ginny but if Ginny is alive it will be even more hard to read about Harry not marrying Ginny(When they should be because they are meant to be together!!). Anyways, update soon. Hope I can continue to read this story.
person Sammie Curls
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. Oh god no! Ginny can\'t be alive. I love Ginny to death and all but if she is alive, I know you won\'t make her and Harry together because he will end up being with Mel. I couldn\'t bare to read it. I would probably cry. Please don\'t let her be alive. Its hard enough reading about Harry kissing someone other than Ginny but if Ginny is alive it will be even more hard to read about Harry not marrying Ginny(When they should be because they are meant to be together!!). Anyways, update soon. Hope I can continue to read this story.

Love always
Sammie Curls
person JTBJAB
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Ginny is alive, huh?

Poor Ron... I wish George wasn\'t in love with her though, because I think that Ron and Katie are more made for
each other then her and George!

And yay to Hermione and Severus finally clearing the air!

Please update asap...pretty pretty please!