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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story! I\'ve been following it since chapter one! You are an awesome author and keep up the good work! Update soon! BTW, how many chapters are left?
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May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 20 - hmm, so is there still a point in finding an antidote? Did Moody have any potion? Did the Weasley twins drink any of it themselves? I think I\'d make the twins swear a wand oath to never again make a love or lust potion. Thanks for the new chapter!
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May 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Will they, won\'t they? How many more chapters of this are we to be subjected to? You have a good story, but you seem to not know how far to take the concept. What does your beta have to say? Is it not their job to make a good story better?
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May 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
These guys just keep getting deeper and deeper! I cannot believe that Fred and George may get busted for doing something illegal! Love how you took this and keep your readers surprised. I swear I don\'t know what to expect next, but I do know that it will be good! Hope work is ok for you...sorry you can\'t sleep but am happy for the chapter. Hugs, Susan
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww no....i need a happy moment and soon!
Please update asap....pwetty pwease!
Please update asap....pwetty pwease!
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First let me say I\'ve been reading your story for a good while now and for the most part I like it. If I didn\'t I wouldn\'t eagerly await each chapter. The thing is, I was waiting for this chapter because the truth is out now and I expected angst, but not what has come about.
I\'m reading a very un-Hermione like Hermione here. I like a Hermione who\'s aggressive and doesn\'t let Snape walk all over her, but I think she\'s way OOC by now. Hermione is above all logical. She\'s a champion of the down trodden and someone who doesn\'t stand for injustice. The Hermione here is none of those things. This Hermione hasn\'t used any logic since the begining of this story and she\'s a real bitch besides. Not once BUT twice she has blamed Snape for the lust potion and he had nothing to do w/ it. Not only does she blame him, but she knows it\'s not his fault and she still tries to blame him. What is that all about? In \"The Morning After\" she was a complete bitch to him the minute after he woke her up. I kind of got the trying to save face thing, but she was unneccessarily cruel and even though she had her memory of the night before she blamed Snape by saying he drugged her when she knew better. She made him out to be the bad guy when he had nothing to do w/ it. Sure he wasn\'t Mr. Sweet Talk, but not only did she not give him a chance to be. She hurled insults and unfounded accusations at him right off. He wasn\'t going to erase her memory till she turned into a raving banshee. Finally we get to Chapter 19. She\'s heard the truth from Harry and she\'s looked in the pensive and again she blames Snape? I can see being mad about the obliviation and manipulation, but she didn\'t give the man much of a way to defend himself. The truth didn\'t seem to be enough to make her see he\'s as much a victim of that potion as she is. He told her the punch was spiked and she drank it. She found out again that the twins were the ones responsible, but she\'s still blaming Snape? What is that? This is the attitude we come to expect from Ron & Harry, but not Hermione. Yes, he lied and tried to manipulate her, but what choice did she give him? She treated him like a sick criminal when he\'s as effected as she is by the lust potion. He knew what honesty would get him. Insults and false accusations.
Over all I love the story, hate Hermione. ;c) Oh well sweetie, you can\'t please everyone, right? You\'ve got a good story though. It\'s fairly well written. A hell of an amusing plot, but a way off character Hermione. Snape is great though. You\'ve got that greasy git, manipulative, sneaky, Slytherin snake down pat.
I\'m reading a very un-Hermione like Hermione here. I like a Hermione who\'s aggressive and doesn\'t let Snape walk all over her, but I think she\'s way OOC by now. Hermione is above all logical. She\'s a champion of the down trodden and someone who doesn\'t stand for injustice. The Hermione here is none of those things. This Hermione hasn\'t used any logic since the begining of this story and she\'s a real bitch besides. Not once BUT twice she has blamed Snape for the lust potion and he had nothing to do w/ it. Not only does she blame him, but she knows it\'s not his fault and she still tries to blame him. What is that all about? In \"The Morning After\" she was a complete bitch to him the minute after he woke her up. I kind of got the trying to save face thing, but she was unneccessarily cruel and even though she had her memory of the night before she blamed Snape by saying he drugged her when she knew better. She made him out to be the bad guy when he had nothing to do w/ it. Sure he wasn\'t Mr. Sweet Talk, but not only did she not give him a chance to be. She hurled insults and unfounded accusations at him right off. He wasn\'t going to erase her memory till she turned into a raving banshee. Finally we get to Chapter 19. She\'s heard the truth from Harry and she\'s looked in the pensive and again she blames Snape? I can see being mad about the obliviation and manipulation, but she didn\'t give the man much of a way to defend himself. The truth didn\'t seem to be enough to make her see he\'s as much a victim of that potion as she is. He told her the punch was spiked and she drank it. She found out again that the twins were the ones responsible, but she\'s still blaming Snape? What is that? This is the attitude we come to expect from Ron & Harry, but not Hermione. Yes, he lied and tried to manipulate her, but what choice did she give him? She treated him like a sick criminal when he\'s as effected as she is by the lust potion. He knew what honesty would get him. Insults and false accusations.
Over all I love the story, hate Hermione. ;c) Oh well sweetie, you can\'t please everyone, right? You\'ve got a good story though. It\'s fairly well written. A hell of an amusing plot, but a way off character Hermione. Snape is great though. You\'ve got that greasy git, manipulative, sneaky, Slytherin snake down pat.
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May 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the update!
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 19 - If I remember correctly, Ginny and Hermione don\'t know that the \"potion only draws those attracted to one another together.\" I hope Hermione realizes Severus was just protecting himself after her hurtful words, which really were pretty nasty - two upset people do not make for intelligent conversation. You\'re still not telling us who fathered Tonks\' child. Not Moody? Thanks for the new chapter!
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 19~ Oh, bloody brilliant! ;-) I just want Hermione to realize that she was a witch in that scene and to forgive the man! Oh, the angst! I can\'t wait for more! You\'re wonderful at this! ~Gin
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May 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good! When is Severus going to marry her?