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by Looneyluna

person JTBJAB
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww....another Weasley on the way...hehehe....i think losing the money from the shop is worse then being sent to Azkaban personally....so great idea for punishment!

Please update soon....i need to know what happens next!
person spitfiresyco69
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person ara
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brava! Oh, too good fore mere words! Your are a truly talented and inventive writer and I absolutely love this story.
person Darkgryffindorgal
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully put. Please continue!
person Sabrina
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great work. I love this story. Please update soon.
person Susan
schedule May 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my! The Weasley twins (dynamic duo??) are going to be ass-poor for the rest of their lives?? And babysitters to boot?? Kind of funny what you could do with that corrupt two-some and a bunch of brand new minds..hee hee. I did feel bad for them(a bit) but they did bring about all that true love. And I do wonder if Severus is going to agree to Hermione\'s bargain. Well done, sweets. I know you have so much to do and that was a great chapter. I am so glad that I am reading this and pleased at how you have kept the whole thing together. I have not found any holes yet. Looking forward to more(as always) Hugs, Susan
person Miki
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rats...images of the two hell-bound maniacs in Azkaban were quite entertaining. Too bad they\'re so irresponsible, Molly could have made them permanent babysitters.

Coming together nicely. Keep the chappies rolling, please.
person cdkobasiuk
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent chapter. Il ike how you layed out the court and stuff. Remus and Tonks! Perfect.

cdk
person azulkan2
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. Glad to see the twins get what for. Looking forward to the next part.
person GinnyW
schedule May 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was very nice. I like the way that you are doing this story. Very enjoyable chapter.