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for Unforgettable

by Looneyluna

person Golden
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant, still! ^_^ Keep it up. Oh an, more Smut please? =P
person lovethelab
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HAHAHA Now Severus knows what he is in for! But poor Hermione - all that lust and no place to go!
person azulkan2
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, I want torn when he oblivated her but now. No antidote. More soon please.
person cdkobasiuk
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Twisted.

Funny.

cdk
person azulkan2
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story...sad that they are so untrusting of each other. Looking forward to more soon, please.
person mysticsong1978
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*SNICKER*

Very, very funny!
person MysticRaven
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
chapter 2 coming anytime soon? ^_^
person snapesflower
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Luna, you should listen to Larilee and keep writing. I agree with her. This could be a really, erotic, fun fic if you carry it on with your normal sense of humor. And don\'t worry about the plot, every plot has been done to death
person Klinky
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heehee, I loed the smut, and I loved the ending! And yes, thought love potions have been used, you swin it around with a unique twist. ::Laughs:: I still can\'t get over George. :) keep up the great work!
person lovethelab
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t believe he obliviated her! I wonder how long the twin\'s potion will last and what will Hermione do if she longs for Snape\'s touch but can\'t remember why!