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for Unforgettable

by Looneyluna

person Susan
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So very nearly there and she gets sick! I loved it. I feel bad for Severus(who wouldn\'t) Thanks for the update!
person illnevertell
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! LMAO!! Oh that is going to bode very well with Snape! He is going to think his advances made her puke!! Too funny. You are doing a great job with this story. I have really enjoyed it. Keep up the good work. Jaimie
person Stormi
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 9 - Truely awesome! Keep up the great work.
person illnevertell
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hang on a sec!!!! I was reading the reviews and It hit me. Hermione said that she was on birth control potion in chapter 3. So, either the Weasley Wonder Twin\'s little trick can negate the effectiveness of the birth control potion or she just can\'t handle her liquor. Great!! Now I really can\'t wait to read the next chapter! Jaimie
person Kylie
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it! And may I say I\'m glad Severus didn\'t and hope he never does go to Knockturn Alley to get laid from now on! he needs to \"save it\" all for Hermione!

Can\'t wait to read more lemons between SS and HG.
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Severus! Nothing like nausea to upset romance (or lust)! Hope things work out just splendidly for them! :)
person Miki
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wicked, wicked woman...spoiling an absolutely lovely lemon with \"morning sickness.\" I need to read the next chapter asap.
How badly will Hermione hex him for obliviating her? I can\'t wait! Hurry!!
person Stormi
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is Hermoine pregnant?
person Gannet
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I started reading your story on Ashwinder and stumbled over it here - with 4 more chapters! But I still can\'t wait for more... It would be great if Hermione could pounce on Severus (instead of the other way round, which is what usually happens, it can get a little boring). Thanks for writing!
person Susan
schedule April 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Those last two chapters were great! Hermione\'s dream was, um..., hot. LOL. And I am so glad you are keeping up the Sneaky Severus aspect. Still looking forward to the Weasley twins making another appearance. How Snape deals with them promises to be a treat, especially going by what you have written so far. Thanks for the quick updates! Hugs, Susan