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for Unforgettable

by Looneyluna

person JTBJAB
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww...bless.....hang on, brain may be working overdrive....but was she on the Potion when they first got together? Is she pregnant....ahh the possibilities!

Please update soon!
person Susan
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Now we know a way to a man\'s heart is not through his stomach, nor is it directly through his chest. LOL. That was very well done. Hermione taking control is great. And a mindless Severus never fails to make me smile. Poor guy needed that. Thanks :D
person GinnyW
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh! More...NOW! I\'ve been following on Ashwinder and you\'re not nearly this far in the story there!!! More more more...oh yeah.....PLEASE! ;-) ~Gin
person mysticslave
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
from the Mystic half of mysticslave -- ooh la la!

You rock! Hehe I can\'t wait to see the next bit and I bet she IS pregnant, no?
person Yabo
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my God. /fans self. More please! Great chapter!
person Golden
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap I\'m loving this... More Smutt! More oral! Heheh, sorry, I\'m a sucker for oral... ::Laughs:: Get it? I\'m a *Sucker* for *oral*. Heheh. Lol, rightthen. =9
person Miki
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you very much. :)
person JTBJAB
schedule April 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm.....next chapter please *blushing whilst trying to hide hungry grin*
person Sabrina
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great work. I am sure Severus is mad that she threw up. Please update soon.
person cdkobasiuk
schedule April 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn you had me going! What a tease! Poor Snape.

cdk