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for Unforgettable

by Looneyluna

person Susan
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG! It is and epidemic of Egyptian Flu! How many other mummies will be turning up? I hope Severus reaches Hermione in time and spills his guts. She is going to go ballistic, and rightly so, but hopefully they can work on the twins and figure out that the potion only attracts your true love. Still loving this, as you know. Hugs,Susan
person DawnEB
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I burst out laughing when I got to\'
person Eddie The Black Maru
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH! you are the embodiement of evil!!!!!!!!!!! you are SO MEAN!!! MEANIE!!! how coud you DO this to ME???????? its not fair, Its not fun I think I am going to cry. damn you. update as soon as you can and then I\'ll forgive ya.
Much Love
Eddie
person illnevertell
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmmmmm! This is getting good! Nice plot twists. I am dying to see how the twins react to all of this. I think I would murder them.
I can\'t wait to read more. * kudos* Jaimie
person JTBJAB
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh poor Hermione, bless her!

I hope Severus finds her and that she hasn\'t taken the potion to get rid of it!

I look forward to your next chapter!
person Monina
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh sooo good! love the story and can\'t wait for more. Surely Severus is going to be in trouble when the twins tell Hermione what happened!!
person Stormi
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 12 - Love the new chapter. Now will Hermoine take the bait or make Snape suffer. I kind of hope she makes him suffer a little bit. Keep up the great work!
person Mysticraven
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been faithfully reading your story. I have to say I love it. Please keep up the great work. Thanks.
person Sabrina
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great new chapter. Is it just me or does anybody else think Hermiones pregnant? How will Severus explain that one.
person Stormi
schedule April 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 11 - I hope Genny gets her brothers but good. Poor Hermoine, I know she\'ll figure it out but shat price will Snape have to pay for his deceit. Looking forwared to the next chapter. Keep up the GREAT Work!