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by Looneyluna

person Ryoko Katsuya
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Woo!
You go!
I have read thsi fricken stroy like 12 times so it must be good ^^
person Susan
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Three pregnancies I had kind of guessed....Molly, Ginny and of course, Hermione. I am going to go with Luna and Minerva. Although a part of me thinking/reading about Minerva being pregnant makes me want to poke my eyes out. LOL. Just kidding. Severus is still being sneaking and I know this is going to bite him on the ass sooner than her thinks. The Weasley boys have dug quite a ditch for themselves...and so has Ginny for that matter. I hope Harry can think clearly and realize that she was lying about paternity. Great chapter, as usual. Keep it coming and thank you so much! Hugs, Susan
person lovethelab
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Way to go Hermione!! I think Snape would do better to tell her the truth and let thing fall from there. But she does have a point with the way he treats his students and his feelings for her.
person Miki
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are my goddess!! I thank heavens you post so quickly.

Just terrific that Hermione is not allowing herself to be pushed around by Snape (at least if his mouth is not attached to a body part). Severus is going to have to confess. Great chapters. I\'m dying to see Arthur\'s reaction to Molly\'s pregnancy....ooooh I bet Ginny will be so embarassed to be pregnant along with her mum. (Hysterical laughter welling up) If McGonagall\'s pregnant make Dumbledore\'s damned twinkle go out - or have him faint like a girl(smirk).

Until next time.
person Sierra
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have often found, that I read about snape, he has changed to whatever that person feels he would be underneath it all. I like this snape he feels much like the one written in books. The story is quite well done, but I wait with baited breath to see the endding.
person mysticraven
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi again, this story keeps getting better and better. Please post again soon. Thanks.
person JTBJAB
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh that sneaky bastard! LOL!

Great chapter, and i eagerly await your next update....as usual!
person Golden
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!!!! They better get married!!!! ::Cheers:: whoop!

Keep up the great work :)
person Alpha
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is fabulous! Please keep writing! Update soon!
person mary
schedule April 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is good! Can\'t wait to see if Hermione accepts Severus\' proposal! Looking forward to reading the next chapter!