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by Looneyluna

person JTBJAB
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
See on one hand ... go Hermione!

But on the other hand ... i really want them to be together!

Damn it! LOL!

Please update soon!
person June W
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch 14 - hmm, hexing Hermione\'s friend ... nope, that would not be a good way to get her to marry him. I think she should be angrier at the Weasley twins, as their potion is what is making Severus so weird. But he also is right to be mad at himself; if he hadn\'t Obliviated her, she\'d remember he is the baby\'s father, which would probably make it better for his suit. I just don\'t understand why she woke up that night and was all mad at him. Shouldn\'t she have still been under the potion\'s influence?
person rose
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thankyou for this new chapter really made my day.
person Stratyllis
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What did Severus\' badge say? \"Severus Snape, whineing\"?
person Stormi
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 13 - You should have heard the horrible cackling that I was doing. Great chapter. Looking forward to Snapes next move. More please. Stormi
person Gannet
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story! It\'s really nice to see Hermione not letting herself be manipulated. I hope there\'ll be a happy end, though!
person Nina
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'m totally loving this. It\'s humorous... Sorta... and serious all at once. Great! Keep it up and please write more!
person Moi
schedule April 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O what tangled webs we weave....

Excellent chapter, nasty cliffy.
person Triskele
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes. Please continue. Wonderful.
person mysticslave
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwww! Poor Hermione. Poor Severus! (And Molly and Arthur and Ginny!) Hope they get out of this scrape and end up working things out for the best. Hope Gred and Forget get what is coming to them!