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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FAB!!!!!
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I don\'t know, do you realize she\'s tweve in that one?
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ahh, you gotta space it out cause people won\'t want to read it like that, put some paraghraphs in there.
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s good but it\'s a bit rushed if you know what I mean. Everythings too fast and even if they did have sex it was about 2 sentences long. Try to put in more detail and description.
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha, that was great!!