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April 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Draco in drag... I've never been harder
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November 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
cute!
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August 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
um...okay this needs some work.
A) Add more description; people want to know and be able to mentally see what the character(s) are doing. So instead of 'Draco: sits down' try Draco sat back down on the cold stone floor of the room of requirement, tossing the back portion of some of his robe behind him so he could sit more comfortably as he gazed out into the circle of miscreants and he's newly found lover.
B) Don't add yourself in as a character to progress your story it's just... well bad form.
C) Use quote marks instead of just having their names there and letting the reader find out if they're saying something. Some people even just you little ' marks to show speech.
I do like the way this story has been going aside from those things however... even though I'm not a fan of Draco in drag *silently weeps for him*
Please continue.
A) Add more description; people want to know and be able to mentally see what the character(s) are doing. So instead of 'Draco: sits down' try Draco sat back down on the cold stone floor of the room of requirement, tossing the back portion of some of his robe behind him so he could sit more comfortably as he gazed out into the circle of miscreants and he's newly found lover.
B) Don't add yourself in as a character to progress your story it's just... well bad form.
C) Use quote marks instead of just having their names there and letting the reader find out if they're saying something. Some people even just you little ' marks to show speech.
I do like the way this story has been going aside from those things however... even though I'm not a fan of Draco in drag *silently weeps for him*
Please continue.
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December 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's a cute idea, but I wish you'd written it as a story rather than just the dialogue.
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December 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LMAO ur good i like it and i agree draco must keep it on all night, ur writing style reminds me of one of my friends lol shes a crazy red head with a laptop lol yah so keep going!!!! xD
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December 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
omg...leave draco with the drag..and HURRY AND UPDATE! sorry, dont mean to be rude, just really want to see what happens :) keep it up!
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August 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
draco should have a corset on
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
XDD I can't wait to see what happens next! ^_^ This is really funny so far. Hehe! Thank you for writing this! Until next time! Nyaa!
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January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Draco has to take it of. I like him better without high-heels ;)
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January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i review and request that draco take off all his clothes :D, or at least the tissue filled shirt lol. i was awsome, maybe next chapter...harry and draco action? *gives puppy dog eyes* pleeease????