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by Laney

person JJ
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don\'t be silly!!!!
Of course we want a last part!!!!
And please don\'t make it so that its only about one or both of them dying from the end of Voldy.
That fire scene was very hot!
You have worked with them in a realistic and sympathetic manner. I was surprised with Snapes
reaction to learning about Lucius. That was a new one!
Can two people so abused finally find happiness?
I would be really sad if they didn\'t.

person ella
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes please do a third part and soon, i love your stories :-)
person antipyro
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes, there should be a third part, you can\'t just leave it there to sit, wide open, without a proper ending!!!!!! I won\'t have it! So there! Now please end this with the last part, even if it is one chapter. A nice long one, with maybe some romance & sex in it.

Wonderful story! I thoroughly enjoyed it.

Thank you. Now go finish it.
person Missi
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I\'M INTERESTED!! YOU HAVE TO WRITE IT!! PLEASE WRITE IT!! Congrats on getting out of school!!
person Hambares
schedule June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh please write the next part. I don\'t want to grovel, but if it is required.......................Thanx!
person Hambares
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Congratulations on graduating! As always your story is intriguing. Glad there is more coming. So fun to read!
person antipyro
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapters! Love the close interaction of Harry and Severus.

I enjoyed the humour of \'too much information\' for Ron and Hermione. lol

I hope your schooling is finally finished and you can spend more time updating and posting.

Many chocolate frogs, confections and Droobles Best Blowing Gum for you and your muse(s) to continue writing and posting.
person antipyro
schedule May 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh yes, such sweet, sweet sex, and Severus had never.....oh my! How charming he was waiting for Harry, Awwwwwww.

This is such a great story. It has that WAFF to it. Great for a bedtime story, lol.

Please write and post soon. We all have to know how this ends for Severus and what comes (hee hee) next.
schedule May 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww that was so cute. I love it when Sev is Dom, but he lets Harry take care of him also.
person antipyro
schedule May 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bumps in the road??? I think not! Not if Severus and Harry get to spend time together, and it\'s o.k. Woooo Hooooo! I know bad things are gonna come, but until then, send in the bumpy parts, lol, or just make them soooo smooth, like fine snarry sex!

Great chapter, just love it. MORE please.

I soothing balm and massage for your tired hands and fingers to type faster.