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December 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your summery sounds so yummy but this chapter doesnt even scratch the surface. Write more!
schedule
November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
continue my dear
schedule
November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You\'re mean!!! >.< *read all your wonderfal \"story starts\" and feels like dieing\"
;_; I wanna know how it continues... How everything continues.
Damm you for being such a good writer!!!
;_; I wanna know how it continues... How everything continues.
Damm you for being such a good writer!!!
schedule
November 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well hurry up with the update will u :)
and yes i liked it , yeah well obiouslly ;)
and yes i liked it , yeah well obiouslly ;)
schedule
November 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a good start---I hope you don\'t abandon this!
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great! Please update soon!
schedule
October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There\'s no chapter! Was hoping for chapter 2D
schedule
October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update? please? you\'ve got a good start, but can you keep it up?
schedule
October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more?
schedule
October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story shows promise, but the part about being an empty shell didn\'t quite fit. Would be better if he still had something. Love, compassion, mercy etc. is gone, what remains is anger, vengance, hate and those emotions. Just some creative advice, you\'re the writer.
Keep \'em coming. I\'d like to see where this story goes.
Keep \'em coming. I\'d like to see where this story goes.