rate_review Reviews

its a really fantastic story, i\'m so addicted but when are you going to post the new chapter? i\'m dying to know whats going to happen! you write so well and you make the characters really easy to identify with but that does have the unfortunate result of impatients for the rest of the story!
kepp up the good work.

keep it up

Good! So good!
Just keep posting!

This chapter is...interesting, and I don\'t say that as a subsatute for bad, it really is intriging. I am, of course, very annoyed that you left with such a cliff hanger. I like to be in Draco\'s head.

Sintalatingly yours
-The Pink Boa

WOOT!!!! I lovw this story!
plus you made it even better with the IWTV book harry was reading!

As always, I liked the new installment. I think you should consider a different way of doing the flashback, it didn\'t read that well the way it is. You may possibly want to cut it. I\'m all a twitter to know what the side effects of the dreamless sleap poition is. I\'m glad to see some of Draco\'s point of view, we don\'t get enough of that.

Egotistcally yours
-Death in the Pink

I like this chapter to, I like how your not just having Harry and Draco through themselves at eachother, take it slow, that\'s the way to go. The one thing I wasn\'t so clear on is how Dumbledoor could have prevented Sirius from go to the MoM, Snape was the one who contacted him, and Dumbledoor didn\'t arrive until after Sirius had left Grimaldplace. Let me say again that your use of discription is divine, and I\'d like to see you use it even more. This little \"understanding\" that Harry and Draco a developing is really quite interesting.

very good. very very!!!! good!!!! ^_^
You write Harry realy well (draco a little less but you\'re getting there .)
I hope you continue your story.

P.s. I agree, don\'t stop writing wonderful stories because you don\'t have a lot reviews. You are great!!!!!

~greetz

ABSOLUTELY WONDERFULL, DRAWS YOU IN, JUST GREAT!

I love how throughfully you develop the story. It\'s already one of my favorites!

Please keep posting!

I am pleased to see anther lovely chapter. I didn\'t find this one quite as enjoyable as the last three, but it was still good. I would like to see some more of your discription, I think that is where you are most talented. The image you have drawn of Harry is most intriging. While you began developeing Draco quite nicely in chapter two, a feel that you still need to work more on him. I am very pleased that you have started building him up though, and you have an interesting way of portraying his relasionship with his parents. Your entire story intrigues me, and as a person who has cut before in the past, I feel as if I have a connection with both Harry and Draco. Having the reader develop a conection with your creations is very important, and you have acomplished this. I can\'t wait until your next chapter.


With Hope
-The Pink Boa