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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your right Leah\'s personality is much more intresting then Jess. I love your plot so far and i hope you continue writing
can\'t wait for next chappie
Branwen
can\'t wait for next chappie
Branwen
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Enjoyed Sev\'s potion disaster and the Lupin thing\'s coming on well. Poor Sev - he must have a lot of questions to ask. The bit about witchcraft being relevant to muggles must have astounded him. She\'s got a nerve, telling him that when she knows that he must know a lot more about it than her. I can\'t help feeling that anyone that confident must get their come-uppence sometime.
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another excellent premise! I\'m liking this a lot, and looking forward to seeing what all\'s going to happen to Leah in the Potterverse! Thanks for the wonderful entertainment, and please update soon!
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha, ha that was great!! Eagerly looking forwaed to more!!! Her language really isn\'t that bad, mine is oh so much worse!!! Keep up the good work!!!!
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is fun - but why is Leah so ungracious to Snape when she manages to smile sweetly at Remus? An intriguing start - please continue.
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome... I love the premise and it does have the same plot as \"there is no place like hogwarts\"\' which is really aswesome, but you have a good diffrent spin to it. I think Jess and Leah are two tottally diffrent chicks, Jess loves snape and leah doesn\'t seem to like him as much..
anyways please continue i think Leah is an awesome chicka and i can\'y wait to see what happens to her
anyways please continue i think Leah is an awesome chicka and i can\'y wait to see what happens to her
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! That was great!! The \"I\'m melting\" was truly inspired!! And Remus(my favorite character, by the by) shooting milk out of his nose was priceless!!! Keep up the good work!!! Looking forward to more chapter soon!!! Please don\'t keep us in suspense!!!
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting. Do you happen to know where you are going with this? I bet a lot of people fantasize about being in JK\'s world. You have a fluid writing style that makes reading your story compelling and a great grasp of the balance between background and dialogue. I look forward to seeing where you go with this. Good Luck!!!!