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for Out of Nowhere

by lightgoddess

person dido
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whoa! Leah\'s quite the busy bee, isn\'t she? I don\'t really see why she got so upset about the Lucius thing. After she the one who so \"liberated\" and clinical about sex, trying to do two guys in one day. Supposedly Leah\'s read the HP books so she knows what bad news Lucius is and she should be glad that all she had to do was a hand job for the subterfuge to protect her. She just doesn\'t seem consistant with her rationale about sex.
person Papaya
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, since I had to read two chapters in order to catch up, I\'ll review them both! First off, I really liked the tattoo, and the emotion behind it . . . really gret imagery! I liked thta Lucius was not-too-well-hung . . . I like the idea of him using the cane to compensate. Poor Leah, though, having to do that! But it was definitely better than what Lucius would have had in mind for her. And the whole fight with Severus was very well written, can\'t say that I blame her for reacting that way. They still have some things to talk about, but it\'s looking like they\'ll be able to get past this whole debacle. And her wanting to keep the pain as a reminder . . . tells a lot about her personality, as much as the tattoo on the bottom of her foot. These two chapters were both excellent, letting us all see so much more about all three characters. I like that she went to Remus, and that he behaved as the gentleman we all know him to be. Are we going to see some more fun with Remus? Can\'t wait to see where all of this is going. As always, thank you for the wonderful entertainment, and please update soon!
person JJ
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha, Ha, Ha! I think Lupin was right. I\'ve never before read of SS. getting hurt by a muggle. Way to go! And totally believable as a reaction from our perspective. Way to go!
person Papaya
schedule April 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Had to read two chapters to catch up . . . well worth it! Like Leah\'s tattoo, the emotion behind it . . . really wonderful imagery. Like that Lucius is not as well-endowed as one would think . . . like the idea of him using the cane to compensate. Poor Leah, having to do that to Lucius! But still much better than what would have happened had he had his way. Looks like Severus and Leah are going to be able to work past their altercation, very good! Both chapters were excellent, and conveyed a lot of information about all three involved in the romance. Remus behaved just like the gentleman we all know he is when Leah cam to him, warmed my heart. I also like that Leah wants the pain of the broken toes as a reminder not to lose her cool like that . . . says a lot about her personality, right along with the tattoo. Can\'t wait to see what\'s going to happen next! Are we going to see a little fun with Remus? As always, thanks for the wonderful entertainment, and please update soon!
person eve/roarke
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When did you start a new story?. Anyway it is really hot! Totally different to your other fanfic.

Please enclude me on update list for Out of Nowhere as well. Leah is a brilliant.

Best wishes.
person JJ
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool! And she can write hot scenes too. I don\'t know how a \"modern\" woman would fit into their mindset, but I say go for Lupin too! I bet he\'s HOT! Would\'nt it be cool if her singing signals that she can do \"magic\" too? Can she juggle both, or will she have to choose? Will she have a spot at Hogwartz, or will she end up a student? Nice work. Update soon.
person Papaya
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, the power of music! It doth soothe the savage beast and all that. Great chapter . . . hot sweaty garden sex between Leah and Snape, followed by romance with Remus. Absolutely wonderful. Can\'t wait to see where this is going. Leah is most definitely a force to contend with! I don\'t think either of these boys really know what they\'re dealing with! Thanks for the great entertainment, and please update soon!
person Alauralen
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha, I also always thought that Malfoy Sr had to be compensating for something tiny!!!! I loved the scene in the garden by the way!!! Who wouldn\'t jump him if they had the chance?! Still can\'t wait to see some action with Remus though. Damn Severus for being so posessive!!! Update soon!!! Thanks for giving 2 chapters in one day though, it was greatly appreciated!!!
person JJ
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, she did set herself up for anything. Interesting direction to go. I laughed at Malfoy. I bet she makes Snape pay.
person Catpower
schedule April 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha! So Leah had to give Lucius manual relief and he was tiny and not the sex god we sometimes assume (I\'ve a pic of Lucius and Sev on my desktop). Serves Leah right. I NEVER get to shag a gorgeous sexy wizard and then go for a star-gazing picnic with a gentleman were-wolf and then force them to accept that they both get to shag me but only on my terms (not that I\'d mind!). She\'s got it made, this girl. Liked the foot job. What could possibly be going to happen next - you\'ve got a way of pulling the unexpected out of a hat.