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well first things first please forgive my hot headed response and thank you for softening the results of the \'incident\' with the spell. this lemon is really hot and i don\'t think you need to edit it whatsover! please keep up the good work!

OMG! So now Leah\'s been bitten she must be a werewolf! She should have stuck to Severus. I reckon Sev has engineered her come-uppence just by letting Leah shag Remus. The sex scene was really hot. The only thing you could do to improve it, in my opinion, is to tell us exactly what dirty things Remus whispered to Leah. I kept wondering. Remus\'s lovemaking seemed so sweet and kind - and then he bit her! Maybe he muttered \"How I\'d love to bite you\" in Leah\'s ear and she just thought he was saying it to be sexy and went \"mmm\". And, what with her wolf tattoo, he thought she must have meant \"yes - bite me!\".

Please update soon - I am really into this story.

Oooo, I can\'t wait to see what Snape has up his sleeve!!! Good chapter, keep \'em comin\'!! I like the way that you are portraying Remus, by the way. He seems very sweet, kind and compassionate, which is how I also pictured him.

I\'m really enjoying the story. Poor Snapie, getting his balls kicked like that..Leah getting her toes broken , oh well, it was awesome like always. Please continue writing

Ha, that was a good chapter. Severus got what he deserved!!! And even if Leah thinks she did I don\'t, he never should have grabbed her!!!! He may have saved her life, but she still had every right to be angry with the situation. Post again soon and thanks for the timeline with the Remus thing!!! I can\'t wait!!!

So now she gets to wake up snuggled up to Remus like two cosy wolf-pups (I can so imagine this moment) and then breakfast in bed with Severus! Worth breaking a few toes for, I\'d say. And I bet Leah will find a way to make the rest of the day enjoyable too, one way or another.

Still Lovin\' it - except for one tiny thing: Bacon drenched in syrup???

This is better than I ever imagined.

So, how much of you is there in Leah?

Don\'t all the females who read this want to be Leah???? YESSSSSS! In our own twisted ways.

This is terrific: touching, tender, defiant, intelligent, sexy, a little angsty, and of course the humour.

I don\'t usually read M/F encounters, but this is great, especially with an OFC. Leah could be a sister, we know her so well, and yet, she\'s still got some interesting history. Like how does she get back??????

I\'ll be watching for more.

Brilliant chapter, loved the order to Dobby, take me to Remus, plus get Severus some Ice.

I just love Leah, from the last chapter its obvious she thinks she will disappear back to her
own time, as quick as she appeared at Hogwarts, SIGH.......I wanted her to stay and become
one third of a delicious sandwich, Remus and Severus, just think!!!

Best Wishes, Sent e.mail as well to clear certain things up.

A very good chapter, I thought the rose on the foot, plus the reason for it, very potent.

I love Lucius, I just can\'t imagine him with a small cock, have you seen Playwitch?

Update soon please.

she gave him one in the BALLS!?! couldn\'t she have broke his nose or something?!? but asides from that intial shock this story really really good! i don\'t think i\'ve ever read a fic quite like it, certainly with serverus getting knocked in his ....................................bits