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for Out of Nowhere

by lightgoddess

person Jenn
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...that was an interesting chapter!! Still cracks me up about Dumbledore and the music he knows...lol I almost forgot about Lucious...I should be smacked!! Jason Isaacs is definitely quite yummy! Now I\'m not sure who would be better for but the both of them.....does that mean I\'m perverted?....lol Anxiously waiting for the next chapter!!!
person Papaya
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! A new pack, eh? That\'s interesting . . . does that mean she\'s in the \'Potterverse\' to stay? So much happening all at once, I love it! I really like Kilyla (did I spell that right?). She fits very well. Leah\'s got a rough time ahead of her, but I\'m sure that in the end it\'ll all work out. Can\'t wait to see your next chapter! As always, thanks for the wonderful entertainment and please update soon!
person Jenn
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a really good chapter! Totally cracked me up when Albus liked that music and not classic country...lol I can\'t stand that stuff!!! (even though I like the new country...lol...don\'t tell anyone) Anyway, that would be cool if she got to have both of them. Imagine having 2 of the 3 sexiest men of the Harry Potter universe....*sigh*....gotta read more stories....lol Can\'t wait for the next chapter!!!!
person Alauralen
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Remmy!! Another kick ass chapter!! Update soon, please!! And I don\'t know if I mentioned it or not, but I love the wolf tattoo!!
person catpower
schedule April 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha! So Remus was kept up all night by Leah\'s music, seemed compelled to suffer his mate\'s noisy expression of rage rather than cast a silencing charm and may soon be a thouroughly hen-pecked were-husband. Serves him right for marking Leah without her permission. You know what they say, \"bite in haste - repent at leisure\". Sounded to me like Cynric was telling Leah that she should settle down and concentrate on a life of domestic harmony with Remus. Will there be cubs, I wonder?
person JJ
schedule April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!!! Did Remus just bite Leah? Will she become a wolf too? How can she ever go back? What will Snape do? I thought your chapter was really hot by the way, but that cliff hanger will have me chewing on my nails until I see what comes next. I think Remus is a great character that hasn\'t been used enough, so I was so happy his \"bits\" made an entrance, but that bite has me on the edge of my seat! Any chance for a threesome?
person Papaya
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Never the wrong story! I enjoy all of your work very much. Great update . . . Severus will have his revenge, eh? Looking forward to seeing what you decide to have him do. As for the scene with Remus, very well done! Hot and steamy, but loving and romantic at the same time . . . brilliant. He\'s a gentleman even when he\'s making love, I love it! Thank you so much for the wonderful entertainment, and please update soon!
person Alauralen
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you, thank you, thank you!!!! That was awesomely yummy!!!! Do it again!!!! Soon!!! Please!!!! I loved the wolf tattoo!!! Great addition!!!
person destiny black
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!Lemons! I think that Leah should be with Remus. Thier chemistry is just great. I\'m so glad that you updated. I\'m going to post my story as soon as possible. Probably tomorrow. I don\'t have internet access anymore. But anywho, your story rocks. Poor Snape. When will Leah get to meet Harry?
person Jenn
schedule April 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well.....Whew! lol That was such a nice chapter!!! lol I thought it was quite hot! I just read through the whole story here so far and I love it! I definitely like both Remus and Severus! One is the bad boy we all love and the other is sweet yet can be bad too....lol Is just too hard to choose! Can\'t wait to read the next chapter!!!!