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May 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was definitly a Snape thing to do. It was really gross, though. What will Remus say to her in the morning? At least she got her own way, she isn\'t bonded anymore. Another excellent chapter, please update soon!!
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May 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
\"She did what any young woman in desperate need of grounding would do, she laid down in the row between the plants..\" - LMAO. No wonder Sev didn\'t want a quickie - she\'d have been covered in mud!
Seriously, Sev is a total bastard. But then, Leah really, really deserved some sort of comeuppence. And Moony showed his true colours - he didn\'t try to rescue her or stay with her. She was tied up - so, for all he knew, she could have been a totally innocent victim.
If I was Leah, I\'d want to go home now.
Gripping chapter, that one, I must say.
Seriously, Sev is a total bastard. But then, Leah really, really deserved some sort of comeuppence. And Moony showed his true colours - he didn\'t try to rescue her or stay with her. She was tied up - so, for all he knew, she could have been a totally innocent victim.
If I was Leah, I\'d want to go home now.
Gripping chapter, that one, I must say.
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter - a bit of the old sentimental stuff, this time. Leah seems to me to be in love with Remus as a result of the bond (and not forgetting the classic shag). How on earth is she to break free when she is moved to tears by the sight of him? It makes sense as she loves wolves. Laughed at the sausages and biscuits - dog food! The irony seemed to be missed on Moony. Leah\'s wolf guides talk eloquently but Moony only whines - isn\'t Leah a bit disappointed about that? There are already plenty of men around who whine expertly with no need for wolf transformation.
Severus must have been appalled by Leah telling him that Moony was an \"exquisite creature\". He is SO going to want revenge of some (hopefully sexual) kind. Teehee. However, to compete with Remus, I think Sev is going to have to come up with something that stimulates Leah\'s maternal instincts. Maybe a basket of adorable puppies that he pretends he\'s going to use in a potions experiment.
Severus must have been appalled by Leah telling him that Moony was an \"exquisite creature\". He is SO going to want revenge of some (hopefully sexual) kind. Teehee. However, to compete with Remus, I think Sev is going to have to come up with something that stimulates Leah\'s maternal instincts. Maybe a basket of adorable puppies that he pretends he\'s going to use in a potions experiment.
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May 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oops! That last anonymous review was by me, Catpower, by the way.
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A beautiful chapter, it was sweet how she read to Moony, very loving. Thanks for the update, and keep it coming! *~Luv Loz, mwa!~*
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is bloody brilliant! I have registered to this site just to let you know how big of a fan I am of this series. Keep up the good work.
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May 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a very sweet chapter!!! I love the way you had her stay with him all night long. And the way she insulted Snape was great and it shut him up. I see that you also had him waiting to make sure she was alright. A very well written chapter all the way around. I can\'t wait for the next chappie, please update soon!!!
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was a neat little twist, Severus having a wolf guide, I mean. I like the way she explained the visuilization used in Pagan practice and, of course, any time that Snape is proved wrong is a good time. Excellent selection on the musical front also! Dumbledore actually knowing modern bands almost makes me LMAO!!!! Keep up the good work. Why didn\'t the wolf guide want to talk to Remus more?
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Really good chapter! I\'m very deeply impressed, not to mention glad that I got to see Kilyla again! Are we going to find out what makes Severus the kindred and Remus the serpent? I realize that Severus had at least some knowledge of the kind of \'magic\' Leah did, and that he was familiar with both Kilyla (to an extent) and Cynric, but are we going to learn how? And I really don\'t understand about Remus being a serpent! I don\'t know why, but I just didn\'t get it. Anyway . . . I really like that you made Dumbledore muggle-music-savvy. He\'s been around a long time, and I can totally see him getting into \'American Pie\' and \'Margarita-ville.\' Can\'t wait to see where the whole Severus-Leah-Remus thing is going, and I\'m really glad that all involved have made an effort to reconcile. Anyway, I\'m starting to turn this review into a novel, so I\'ll go now. As always, thank you for the wonderful entertainment, and please update soon!
P.S. Are you Wiccan?
P.S. Are you Wiccan?
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April 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, thank you, lightgoddess, for your review of my review (is that a quasi-review?)
I\'m still loving the story, although things aren\'t looking too promising puppy-wise - what with Remus\'s secret serpent. Loved it when Leah cast her perfect circle, calmly accepted the physical manifestations of all the things that she normally just visualised and then insisted that she couldn\'t do magic and \"proved\" it through her lack of self-confidence with a wand. Talk about being in denial! We now know Leah is incredibly brave because she invited a large spider into her circle (eek - don\'t tell Ron!). I can\'t help thinking that, so far, Severus is taking Leah\'s \"I just want both men\" thing lying down - when are we going to see the wrath of Snape unleashed? After all, he is a man with an alpha-male wolf guide (that was a surprise). Also, Leah was bitten - surely it\'ll be a struggle for her to drag herself away from Lupin? I\'m sure I\'d struggle to drag myself away after a night of passion like that! But then again - if it was Snape - \"Drag me! Drag me!\".
I\'m still loving the story, although things aren\'t looking too promising puppy-wise - what with Remus\'s secret serpent. Loved it when Leah cast her perfect circle, calmly accepted the physical manifestations of all the things that she normally just visualised and then insisted that she couldn\'t do magic and \"proved\" it through her lack of self-confidence with a wand. Talk about being in denial! We now know Leah is incredibly brave because she invited a large spider into her circle (eek - don\'t tell Ron!). I can\'t help thinking that, so far, Severus is taking Leah\'s \"I just want both men\" thing lying down - when are we going to see the wrath of Snape unleashed? After all, he is a man with an alpha-male wolf guide (that was a surprise). Also, Leah was bitten - surely it\'ll be a struggle for her to drag herself away from Lupin? I\'m sure I\'d struggle to drag myself away after a night of passion like that! But then again - if it was Snape - \"Drag me! Drag me!\".