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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep going. Can\'t wait to find out what Draco does to her.
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Veelas are so sexy. I love Veela fics...Especially Draco/Hermione Veela fics.
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
man ... i fill sorry for draco and i hope hermione will talk to him now and will ok it .... i wonder how the professor and his parents acted when draco grad mione and ran ... well in till next time later
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Eeee!! This is so good. Update soon!
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I love this story! :)
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
After ending the chapter like that, you definitly have to update a whole lot faster. Please, I want more! Also this was an amazing chapter.
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story! Great job! Please update soon!
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story - very interesting tactic to take to place the entire dilemma on Hermione\'s shoulders. The little details you have in this last chapter, like Draco playing with her hair, were quite good. You have some issues with spelling though, especially with hominyms like (dear should\'ve been deer, in deer in the headlights). I really like the story, good job.
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh! So good of you to update. I so love veela fics and yours is one of my favourites. Love the Hermione and the Draco characterisations. Tooo many people make them instantly fall and love and its all roses and no interest. Love the punch!!!! But want so much more!
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August 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, I like the plotline so far. But you really need to work on your spelling, maybe you should get another beta, you can never have too many of them! You have a ton of incorrect homonyms, which can get very distracting. Also, I noticed that you kept writing G-d instead of God. Is that because of a religious belief that you have? If it is, kudos to you, if it isn\'t, it\'s kind of annoying. And instead of godson you wrote G-d son. It\'s one word, and the \"g\" isn\'t capitalized.