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i love this story! PLEASE keep writing it!

Ohhhh, I like! I've only read one other "Draco is a Veela' fic, but I really love the idea, especially w.Hermione as his mate. More please, soonest!

Oh i am so glad you are back!! I hate all the veela stories that never get finished. And I love the way this one is going. Can't wiat for the next chappy!!!

i love this story. update soon!

OMG! Please update soon. I LOVE this story!!!!!!!!!

i was just really getting into the story!!!
how could you?
ITS AMAZING!!!
BRILLIANT!!!
FANTASTIC!!!!!!!!
PLEASE DO MORE I CAN'T WAIT TO READ IT!!
good luck with your school stuff!!!!!!!!!!
love t!!!!!!!!!!!!

You need a beta reader. You make a lot of simple little mistakes that could easily be corrected. Like in the first several chapters, you use "ones" instead of once

And in the later chapters, "than" instead of "then"...

Just to clarify things, I did have a beta. She was nice enough to review about two or three chapters before I started taking too long in updating. Unfortunately I lost her e-mail. I hate to make excuses for my pathetic writing skills simply do to English is not my first language and sometimes I get confused translating one to another, but it is true. So please don't criticize my beta. She was great. If she is still out there and thinks my last chapters need revising, please let me know... elidally82@aol.com

I thank you all for reviewing regardless of how terrible my writing skills are.

Olga LaLa Out...

bing bing!!!!!!!!! you updated!! oh wow:) such lovely movement and just thank you!!!!!
I love how you characterize draco. Please update again soon!!

I love your take on how Draco and Hermione end up mating. It was very Slytherin of Draco to use her best friends to turn her hand. I also love the fact the Hermione does not go out without a fight, insisting that BOTH Malfoys switch sides. Great addition. The only issue I had was with your spelling. Next time make sur to doubl check it, it makes the story much more enjoyable.