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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
first of all \"god\" in godson or godfather doesnt have to be censored seeing as though you arent talking about god GOD. Second of all the expression good God AGAIN doesnt have to be censored and seeing as though you are writing for aff if i may suggest, to write the whole word. and its onCE not onES. Just some suggestions for future writing.
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good fic. very engaging and well written. Your descriptions are good but the plot seems a bit rushed. I hope that you continue on with the fic because i think that it has great potential. PLEASE update soon!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks
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April 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love it ^_^ undate soon
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, Very intresting. Can\'t wait for more.
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just read the story, i\'m excited to see what happens next.
-sarah ;-)
-sarah ;-)
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It\'s much better. There\'s still room for improvement, but this is a great start. Good job! I liked the way you have Draco recieve information in a dream.
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow... that is very unique. No one had ever had a marking like that before. I hope you update soon. I really like your story!
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can\'t wait for what happens next...as for what I want, I\'m open as long as there is some good hermione/draco interaction.
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn. that was awesome. update soon...draco should begin his persue and seduction of hermione!! and maybe hermione should have had this dream as well as sum kind of sign or sumthing...but w/e u have been doing rox so keep it up
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April 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I wonder how Hermione is going to take the news. Update soon.