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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi,
I just started reading this fic as of 04/17/05. I must say that even though you have a Beta reader, this fic is full of misspellings and homonym mistakes. Please have your Beta read your chapters more carefully, as these mistakes are *very* distracting to readers. Also, godson is a single word, not two (I could care less if you censor the god part of it, but please make sure that it is not divided).
I just started reading this fic as of 04/17/05. I must say that even though you have a Beta reader, this fic is full of misspellings and homonym mistakes. Please have your Beta read your chapters more carefully, as these mistakes are *very* distracting to readers. Also, godson is a single word, not two (I could care less if you censor the god part of it, but please make sure that it is not divided).
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story BUT isn\'t Lucius going to be charged for cursing a student (or anyone for that matter) since there were obviously witnesses AND at a school AND where Dumbledore rules? Please make sure he faces the consequences...while his son gets to know Hermione better :)
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay, good chapter. update soon please! ;-) looking forward to more draco/hermione interaction
-sarah ;-)
-sarah ;-)
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April 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome Fic!!!! please continue!
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
C\'mon... There has to be more... Really!!! Draco the uncomfortable veela, and his mate, Hermione???? More!!!!
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooh! What a way to find out...more soon please! I\'m dying to see (er, read) Hermione\'s reaction :) And then the marking scene...
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April 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think it so great, I can\'t wait to your updates. You are the best. :)
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April 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Noooooooooooooooooo
come on now that was so unfair how could you do that to me?
Waaaaaaaaaaaaa
anyways great chapter
look forward to more asap
come on now that was so unfair how could you do that to me?
Waaaaaaaaaaaaa
anyways great chapter
look forward to more asap
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good job!
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are soooo evil. How could you end it their? I love this story. Please update soooon.