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June 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was a good story. But there were a lot of mistakes, spelling and grammatical, that I just couldn't overlook. At one point you said that Draco thrust into Hermione's clit, which is humanly impossible. I liked the story, but I suggest you get a beta.
~Secret Letter C
~Secret Letter C
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November 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
very intersting
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November 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Only one word to describe that. Hot! I loved it
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
--Beta? Read it and tell me if you think there was one ^^--
I\'m just stabbing in the dark here, but I\'ll say \"no\"
I\'m sorry, but there\'s so many errors, it\'s hard to overlook them and finish the chapter. Every sentence seems to be running, and half the words in them don\'t make logical sense. I like the story idea, it seems very interesting. I\'d love to read this once it\'s beta\'d, so please send me an email if you choose to have it fixed.
I\'m just stabbing in the dark here, but I\'ll say \"no\"
I\'m sorry, but there\'s so many errors, it\'s hard to overlook them and finish the chapter. Every sentence seems to be running, and half the words in them don\'t make logical sense. I like the story idea, it seems very interesting. I\'d love to read this once it\'s beta\'d, so please send me an email if you choose to have it fixed.
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please tell me U R writing more?! \'Cause OH-MY-GOD that was fab-u-lust. Jeez you got me cumming where I stand. Hope that\'s not too vulgar but-SHIT! Seriously update ASAP!!