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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really, really enjoyed that! It was well written, with lots of feeling and lots of lust...lol. You totally captured the moment and the seriousness of their situation! I\'m hooked!
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April 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a GREAT story. I totally love it! Please never stop writing (but leave this story that way it is, it\'s perfect!)
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Shot---Hot---Awesome!
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was beautiful.
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are one of few authors that has the ability to convey what you want without wasting words. I\'ve seen too many authors just ramble for paragraphs beating the point they were trying to get across into the ground, and its getting really annoying. Anyway great one-shot I could see everything you described in my mind\'s eyes. It was incredibly hot, great work!
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April 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful
~Mit~
~Mit~
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good thing it\'s short - keeping it in the present tense any longer would have been a disaster. I like the fact it leaves our imaginations open because you explain nothing. Keep it oneshot.
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like it. It\'s dark, yet hopeful. Very well written.