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for Quiet, Quiet

by HappilyJaded

person Laine
schedule March 31, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Again, wonderfully fantastic. You're description is so alluring and eloquent, yet not so over done as to render one mindless and skipping to the next paragraph. well done!
person kamilla
schedule December 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is beautiful and sad, one of the best combinations when writing this pairing.

I love it. Its brilliantly written.
person Stephieania
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Your story made me very happy in the pants!
Amazing story, absolutely amazing!
person Lioncourt
schedule August 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! One of the best oneshots I have read in a long time.
person BalancingConfessions
schedule June 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant. Just...brilliant.
person nightslight
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Very well done, l love the writing.
person Darkate
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Don't you just love rough sex against a wall? lol.
person t
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is sooooooo sweet and romantic!!
its amazing!!!
please do more i have to find out what happens
please!! please! please!!
person TheAngelOfSilence
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A lovely little vignette...thanks for that!
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow.

I thought that was beautiful. I've never read anything so short and yet so emotionally satisfying. And hot. My god. I thought that the present tense worked wonderfully. I often used to experiment with it whilst writing, and found that I was absolutely bloody useless! You, however, have mastered it!

I thought the whole silence thing was very, very hot. And a gorgeous new dimension to the whole having heated sex idea!

Thank you for your story, I'm very glad that you found the time to write it.