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for Learning to Live

by serpentlady

person Cerie
schedule June 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwwwwwwwwwwww. Harry\'s gone crazy, how cute.
person sbkar
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You gave yourself a interesting outline when you listed out what Harry wanted to do after escaping. You also have him going to the Malfoys.

Well, he really needs to get his strength back, he was severely injured. I\'m sure he\'ll have to work out/train at Grimmauld Place.
There should be some basic Dark Magic things there, and Mrs. Black\'s portrait is there to practice on. I\'m certain there are some
loverly (yes, that\'s a colloquialism) Death Eaters to practice on: Mr. Nott, Mr. Crabbe, Mr. Goyle, heck even Wormtail...or Nagini...
There are anti-apparation wards at the unplottable Malfoy Manor...how ever will he get there? And, he\'s under the impression that
the Voice is female...so, who might he inadvertently pin his hopes on?
person XaloneXalwaysX
schedule June 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So then...like...where the hell is the rest of the fic?! Update! Now damn you! Nowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww!!!! O_O! Heh...uhh I mean...please update SerpentLady ^_^U...........................................the whole torture of the evil uncle...WOW. That was...WOW. Awesome a FUCK dude. The gore...lurv! LOLOL! Anyway...uhh yeah post more. ;__;
person thrnbrooke
schedule May 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the clear up! Can\'t wait for the real chapter 7!
person Quidgal
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the updates... it\'s been awhile! I can\'t wait to find out what happens. Keep up the great work!! And good luck with exams, I know how you feel.
person Quidgal
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, and I forgot to mention... that last chapter isn\'t from this story, is it? I was getting really confused.
person thrnbrooke
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So Harry is hidden away, Hermione, Draco and Severus are in a relationship.... interesting. Can\'t wait for chapter 8. Though chapter 7 was titled 8. Hmm.
person redmeadow
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ummm....up until this chapter I have liked this story. Not a big fan of the slut Hermione, but your not selling the whole Draco loves Harry thing if he is giving it to the bint. Love must be mean something different to you if so. Cause I don\'t see it. As well as you going on about Serverus and Petunia. I hope this is a chapter for another story. It seems a shame to ruin this one by having this as part of the plot.
person lilywood
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Um, I really don\'t think that chapter was for this story. When are you going to update Learning to Live?
person Shaddy
schedule May 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Erm okay \'Chapter the Eigth\' so i\'m totally lost! Has there been a mix up because this chapter really doesn\'t fit with the rest.
Hope you update the real chapter soon.
Shaddy