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I have never seen a story that got progressively worse as the chapters went on. Each chapter was shorter than the last, with less and less actual content in them and always begging for reviews at the end. If you want people to give you reviews other than flames you might want to try writing an actual story next time. This is a travesty against the Harry Potter Universe.

that way simply cool i like it alot

Bravo!! That is the most intense scene of torture I have ever read! Just what that fat bastard deserves though. Some of it even I have never thought of, and I applaud your bravery in writing it. Most authors are too chicken to actually write scenes like that, but you aren't. I admire that. I haven't read the rest of the fiction yet, I just had to review after that chapter. I will review later and tell you my opinion on the rest of the story.

This story is Freakin' Awesome!! Easily one of the most fascinating, twisted, dark Harry Potter stories I have ever read. I LOVE the relationship between Harry and Draco. It just goes to show that you don't have to be good or sane to be in love. And I really like the Dark Harry. He is so enchaningly psychopathic. Makes me want to dissect his personality and study it. Is it the magic that is making Harry psychopathic, or the events and subsequent isolation? Does Snape ever get to give Harry his present from Dursley? If he does, will Harry appreciate them? I suppose it doesn't matter, but I also like the image of Harry and Draco just living their lives, traveling and obliviating people as they go. This is truely a very good story.

great story

loved it, the way you expressed Harrys phycopathic state was wounderful coul have been loner though, the way you had Snape torture Vernon was wonderful and very well written

Keep writting
Insanely yors,
BloodPriestess

Aww, my chest kind of constricted whenever the ending came. This was kind of short compared to most of the fics I read, but I LOVE it. It's so cool. I really liked the spells you thought of, like the walk the shadows-way one. That was awesome. It reminds me of like..Forgotten Realms, which I don't know if you know what that is, but it's an awesome book series thing. Anywho. I love this. Really. Awesomeness. XD

I'm in the middle of reading this story and usually I wait to review until I'm done but I just have to say....THAT WAS THE BEST TORTURE SCENE I HAVE EVER READ!!!!!

okay, finished now.... it was great!

Oh, lol. This was pretty interesting, I love your fics!