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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG that is like so sad.... I almost cried.
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh! It was beautiful! I am SO going to go read your other works. I did have a teensy tiny little problem though..not evn really a problem just something i think you might want brought to your attention...you kept switching prespective..or is it the Tense..not sure which. I\'m sure if you read it you will catch what I mean. And once again it isnt a flame i was just thinking you might want made aware of it if you weerent already. but really Beautiful. Simply Beautiful...
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great... I would love to hear what happens afterward, how the other people react.
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September 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was really good. and so sad. but i really liked it. if i wasn\'t so damned tired, i would be crying right now. great work
moi
moi
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it was good acually....i thought it was very awsome the way they died...it was cool...i liked it
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April 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omg, that was so sad, and so beautiful. ::sobs::i love these fics even though they make me cry. please write more
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April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! I hope they were able to together! Poor boys! I hate that everyone kept them together. I wonder what their reactions were when the two were found.
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Suitably depressing, as any suicide fic should be. *S* A few grammar errors, but nothing major. I don\'t normally read suicide fics, but I\'m in a mood tonight so I figured I\'d give it a go. All in all, well done.
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thought it was very good. Sad but good and i hate all their supposed friends. the only thing i wish you had included was the reactions of everyone else when the bodies had been found. Would they finally realize their stupid mistake and feel the proper guilt or would they remain utter idiots?
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April 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really liked it. A part of me wants to know what happens when they are found, but part of me is very happy with where you left it.
it was quite a bittersweet symphony really!
it was quite a bittersweet symphony really!