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by slygriff21

person Alauralen
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffle, sniffle* Graduations are always so sad as well as so exciting!! I am glad that everyone has their own set of plans and that Hermione and Neville will be going home with the rest of the Charmed Ones. Will the other guys be going as well? Can\'t wait to find out!! Going to the next chappie now!!

Blessings,
Alauralen
person Alauralen
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a wonderful ending to a wonderful story!! It also smells like an awesome base for a sequel!! You did a magnificant job on this one honey, you should be very proud of your self!! I look forward to your next piece!!

Blessings and well wishes,
Alauralen
person Alauralen
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Draco!!! Good for Hermione, though, she deserves to move on and be happy. I am sure that Neville will be there for her in every way possible, he is so sweet!! Another chappie that had me on the verge of tears, good job!! I love this story more and more with every chapter!!;) Keep up the good work!!

Blessings,
Alauralen
person Alauralen
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That chapter so did not suck!! I loved the fight scene and the spell kicked ass!! Neville and Hermione are going to be so good together!! The sex scene rocked!!! It was so totally HOT!! I am going eagerly to the next chapter!! Hee hee hee, I am so excited!!

Blessings,
Alauralen
person angel
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was wonderfull and im glad they all founf happens in the end and they are all married i still would of lied it more in it was draco she was married to but ohhh well neville is good to and i cant wait in till your next story and in till then later

angel
person Alauralen
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
They\'ve got a plan!! Weeee!! I can\'t wait to see what happens next!!! Very good job so far!! Keep up the good work!!

Blessings,
Alauralen
person Alauralen
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well everyone else took Hermione\'s premonition better than she did, but I guess that can be explained by age and experience. I like the fact that Severus and Piper were able to cure Remus and now his mind can be at ease all the time. You are writting the couples very well and with each chapter it seems more and more as though I am watching something instead of just reading it. Not many stories are good enough to do that and this is definitely one of the good ones!! Keep up the good work!!

Blessings,
Alauralen
person Mina
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked this fic a lot. there may be some dicreptencies but all together, you did a good job. also, i like to point out that Neville\'s grandmother\'s name is not Kathleen but Augusta; it\'s in book 6 of the HP series. again, good job.
person Newtype
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey great stroy thus far, please write more
person angel
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice chapter i hope all goes well and the battle and remus and sirius live please let them live .... well in till next time keep up the awesome work and later for now

angel