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for The Power of Five

by slygriff21

schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
RE: Chapter 1 -- Cool concept, however, how is it that Hermione can have Paige's power of summoning things (which is a variation of her Whitelighter power) if Hermione's father is a werewolf and not a Whitelighter.
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapters 4 and 5 *ERROR ALERT*
In chapter four, 'For the first time, Hermione Genevieve Granger Halliwell, saw her family. The Halliwells.'

However, in chapter five, '
schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter 7

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schedule October 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
RE: chapter 10

Well that just plain sucks! Very disappointed...let me guess, you're going to have Hermione either (1) be a spinster, or (2) match up with some diplo like Voldemorte or Cole. =P
person Anon
schedule February 14, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person ~*~Tasha~*~
schedule December 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Darn ... I thought the premise of this one was a really good one. I admit that I sneak a peek at the end of the fics to make sure that the ending it all right, especially when a pairing isn't listed. When I found out who HG ended up with (I won't give it away her except to say that it wasn't SS), I decided not to read the story. I'm sure it is a great story though if your other ones are anything to go by. Sorry.
person Megan Consoer
schedule November 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters? Or can you write a sequel to this story please?
person Shardae
schedule September 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story.. Its good...
person L4ETJE
schedule September 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
THIS WAS A VERY VERY GOOD STORY
KEEP WRITING :)
BYE BYE
person Alauralen
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome battle!!! Kick ass vanquish!! And everyone lived!! Hooray!! Go Hermione!! Go Charmed Ones!! Go Harry!!

Blessings,
Alauralen